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Azi Demonica

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It was definitely different to London's usual speech, but oh well, there's a first time to everything. Oh, and West, did you mention London's reaction to Maal'Lok throwing her through the air? When I read your post earlier today, I did not recall you mentioning anything about it.

Also, Annie, you mention Annie using magical attacks against robots, tho ADVs are not robots, they are advanced soldiers, meaning soldiers wearing hi tech armour. Their sensors allowed them to detect Morinth et al.

10-Mar-2018 04:27:27

Westenev

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Inferi said :
Don't you mean downloaded? Or am I reading this wrong?

Kids these days have lots of illicit things on their phones. Videos of schoolyard fights, facebook, a notebook to keep track of any fbi secrets you come across.



Inferi said :
Dear god, West, that third-person speech is ridiculously jarring to read.

In English, "Third-Person" speak tends to signify mental instability or insanity. I figured this was what I wanted to try with London.



Azi Demonica said :
It was definitely different to London's usual speech, but oh well, there's a first time to everything. Oh, and West, did you mention London's reaction to Maal'Lok throwing her through the air? When I read your post earlier today, I did not recall you mentioning anything about it.

The anti-depressants wore off.

Westenev doesn't not not read things as carefully as they think they should! Operative Assistant Role-player Westy will endeavour to go back and see what went wrong. FAILURE IS NOT AN OPTION!

EDIT: I revise the earlier statement. The Anti-depressants wore off, AND London hit her head. I mean, I guess we could assume the post begins AFTER London rag dolled, but I think I think I would have edited some parts of the post if I had seen this earlier.
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10-Mar-2018 06:48:18 - Last edited on 10-Mar-2018 06:54:25 by Westenev

Azi Demonica

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Yes, it's fine, I suppose. More staring, and more yelling, should work perfectly.

Ha, speaking of fanfics, before starting Psychosis a few years ago, I intended to make a much simpler Mass Effect fanfic, about a quarian criminal who was marooned on Earth. He gets arrested for crime, then the Reapers invade Earth, but this allows him to escape prison. He later meets an asari, and the two must work together to survive the Reaper-invaded human homeworld. I ended up not liking the idea, and it didn't make sense considering the lore behind the quarians, anyways. But, I suppose the quarian could have been marooned on another planet, captured by slavers, released/escaped, and ended up on Earth by other means.

Sigh, the problem about being a writer hobbyist, is I have too many ideas that are their own story. I have one more story I'd like to start, but I really wanna try harder to finish my fanfics first.

Anyways, this is all for tonight, good night, ya'll.

10-Mar-2018 08:02:57 - Last edited on 10-Mar-2018 08:04:17 by Azi Demonica

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