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Inferi

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Fysyx said :
Target: If the pay's good, yeah :P


So, given what I've been thinking, I'm wondering if you would mind him being on the airship for a slightly different reason, although still having to do with the bounty. Mainly, trying to find out more since the individual isn't exactly the easiest to track down.

If that's fine, then how does this sound to you:

Target: Self-titled as "Prismatic Storm". No name available. Female, appears early to mid 20s. Typically seen with mid-length brown hair. Most distinguishing feature is the scarring of her face: the left side is crossed over with what appears to be many black lines burned into the skin, from a solid line running down the center of her face to back behind her ear. There seems to be no pattern, the lines just starting at arbitrary points and going to others. The only consistency is that they all connect The right is lesser, but still distinguishable: a mark that circles the eye in a teardrop shape, the round edge facing inward while the point faces towards the ear. As it tapers down, however, that side curves upward into what seems to be the shape of a flame.

No images are on file of this individual, and they are classified as extremely dangerous, and it is warned that any attempt to apprehend them comes with serious risk to one's life.


Now, as for the pay of it and whatnot, the Guild is the one that posted it, but there's a sidenote that the Chancellor of Verania wants them apprehended as well, and his reward is a lot. Enough to keep someone going for a long time on their own, at least.

What Cooke would have found out on his own is pretty vague, only that this person has been related to several incidents involving recovered Artifacts (which are basically things that seem to have been around forever but hold extreme amounts of power...you know, typical fantastical shit) and that they have been seen - or people claim to have seen them - in the company of another
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21-Jul-2017 00:18:53

Inferi

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individual known as the "Blade Dancer". The reason that's important is because it gives him two leads: the first one being that an author apparently had an interview with his target at one point, and they're one of the only people to have ever been up close to them without it being in combat, while the second is that the Blade Dancer apparently had a rather large-scale combat scenario against Gareth Arenar a year or two ago.

By sheer coincidence, both Gareth Arenar's son and the author that wrote out the interview are on the ship, and it seemed to Cooke that a flight would be a good chance to get information out of either of them relating to any more details about who this person is and why they're classified as so dangerous.

I would figure that he would also have not been going after them too long, although finding out information about someone that there's almost nothing about probably takes a bit of time.

So is this too grandiose and vague for you? I wouldn't blame you if it was, since I feel like it might be and I'm the one who wrote it.

And...please don't ask me to name guns. I have a hard enough time naming people and places. If you have something in mind that you think sounds cool, go with it and I will too.
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21-Jul-2017 00:18:57

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Ancient Drew said :
How about having the government or a very powerful secret group being involved in the experiments? I had the idea that this would have gone on in early days from the release of crystallis tech, but the tech was still being developed and experimented with heavily.


Ok, what exactly are you trying to get in, here? Are you trying to write out a whole separate subplot or something?
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21-Jul-2017 00:20:05

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...no, you didn't. Telling me Urr is the leader of Mu helps 0%. Instead of asking you "who is Urr?" now I have to ask you, "What is Mu?" And even then, it doesn't answer the question of who Urr exactly is, anyways.

You're gonna need to give me an answer that actually makes sense at some point, and if you could do it on here and not make me try to read the bio for the two or three extra words you put in that would be fan-friggin-tastic.
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21-Jul-2017 00:24:49

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Ok, then. What about having that part is so important to you? For example, why does she have to have her entire family killed and be on the run?

Are you trying to get me to make some random organization that's trying to kidnap her?

And before you get defensive, I'm asking this so you can maybe figure out what you actually want. Since you don't know why you put that stuff in there, or at least don't know what it actually is, I would like to see if we can find out why you feel it's necessary.
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21-Jul-2017 01:14:48 - Last edited on 21-Jul-2017 01:15:54 by Inferi

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