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Azi Demonica

Azi Demonica

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West,
np West, intro you character, or I can intro her for you, it works either way. Would you like me to intro your dragon?

As for BW, well, no, the mafia did not put that ammunition depot there, I sometimes sacrifice reason or sense to allow users to just role-play in a more exciting fashion. I suppose you could say that the ammo depot was put there to make it easier to transport via the train station, which is nearby, because in Broken World, since there was so much war for so long, people just got used to a military presence, and it sort of mingled in common life. The prospect of dwindling forests and wildlife has also forced communities to be more closely formed.

The briefcase Annie took is a simple computer, which the Black Hand have been trying to get, so they found it with RADAR and are seeking it out. Annie mentioned it contains information the Black Hand needs, I think.

The train is arriving at so late to provide a means of escape if necessary. I presume the constant wars made it very late, due to things like train tracks being destroyed, which did happen in the World Wars, so a hasty repair was necessary and so stalled services.



Wolf, last page
You like that little wooden robot? Heh, I thought you'd find him annoying, I tried to make him this annoying, talkative thing, looks like that backfired!

I will have a look at your role-play today, I hope. Give me some time to type out feedback!

08-Jan-2017 22:04:33 - Last edited on 08-Jan-2017 22:05:28 by Azi Demonica

Azi Demonica

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OK, thanks for confirming that, Annie.

Yes Wolf, I have just started writing the next post of the RP, then forgot to read your own RP! I will stop typing my next post and read your RP, seeing as that's what I said I'd do! Despite sleeping in and waking up at 12:30, my memory still isn't going too good.

08-Jan-2017 22:17:33

Azi Demonica

Azi Demonica

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Wolfpack, about your role-play,

Ah, darkness, a simple and popular yet effective and creepy atmosphere as always. So, there's just moonlight for Arda, with a different darkness to the north, that's interesting. God war, shattered light, ''crystal tears'' is a nice feature. Uncharted resting place, that's a good mysterious feature, and a prophecy.

Ah yes, ''It was a dark and stormy night!'' for this alludes to the prophesy. Something approaches the father, but who is the mother? What's she doing? Backstory of Skoll. Hey' it's Aylin! Mention of tribals. Oh what, is Shadowstone waking up right here? What a coincidence! The story ends with a dire consequence, tying the child to the role-play.

Overall, the story mixes popular and uncommon themes, there were a few surprises, it's simple yet effective, and oftentimes, the simplest themes are the best. The quest is to gather the tears, protect the newborn, and bring light back to the world!

Three tribes.

Seven tears that must be found, somewhere, somehow.

OK, I will try to make a bio soon! But, one question, do characters have to be part of a tribe? I was thinking of mixing some themes, such as Viking-like folk based on those who briefly settled in Newfoundland (they could be foreigners who settle somewhere), but I suppose the colonial era or Conquistadors are too advanced, as they had firelocks during that time.

08-Jan-2017 22:30:24

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