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I did a little more editing on my post, so that she could easily find where I included her mistakes.
Just your friendly neighborhood gay boy!
03-Jun-2016 19:28:27
Westenev
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So, would the game be like Sword Art Online, where beating the boss unlocks a new "level" with different resources/conditions? Or are we talking about a true living story, where completing quests permanently changes the fate of the game world?
A bit of both actually. Taking both concepts and mashing them together. Killing the boss unlocks a new 'level with different resources and conditions while doing this also makes Permanently changes to the 'game'
So, would the game be like Sword Art Online, where beating the boss unlocks a new "level" with different resources/conditions? Or are we talking about a true living story, where completing quests permanently changes the fate of the game world?
A bit of both actually. Taking both concepts and mashing them together. Killing the boss unlocks a new 'level with different resources and conditions while doing this also makes Permanently changes to the 'game'
and nothing was spoiled
03-Jun-2016 23:13:21
Pinchcapa said to Doctor Pinchstein in a whisper
,"Ok I will tell her
." She went to Annie and told her to access Pinchasuma's finances.
She said in a whisper,"
You got it." She was accessing Pinchasuma's finances when she heard the alarm go off saying security alert. "Damn it!",
said Annie felt the pressure and the panic of being pursued. She had sweat was streaming down her face from her forehead."How did they know I am out of my cell and in here? I found it what I was looking for." She made it look like Pinchwald was still in the room and using the computer that if someone came in they won't know what they're up to and think Pinchwald was still on the computer.
She caught the plasma pistol that Doctor Pinchstein thrown to her. That's when she stood up and she said in a calm voice,"All ready to fight." She aimed her gun at the door ready to fight.
On the other hand Pinchcapa was worried that Annie will get hurt or get killed. She said to Doctor Pinchstein ,"I don't think it's good idea for her to fight. I think she should hide because when they come in here they won't see her and think she went for more testing, then we can finish what we are doing when they leave. What do you think she should do Doctor Pinchstein?"
Now Annie felt very confuse what to do because she wanted to fight but she was also scared made her body shake a little, hungry and feeling so tired to from what she went threw. She thought about it for a few minutes and said in a whisper,"I am going to fight with you guys." The reason she choose to fight because she want revenge on them.
*Taken from ITV*
Not bad, Annie... Except for the fact that you copy and pasted certain words and phrases to fix your sentences. Which is bad. Just your friendly neighborhood gay boy!
On the other hand Pinchcapa was worried that Annie will get hurt or get killed. She said to Doctor Pinchstein ,"I don't think it's good idea for her to fight. I think she should hide because when they come in here they won't see her and think she went for more testing, then we can finish what we are doing when they leave. What do you think she should do Doctor Pinchstein?"
Now Annie felt very confuse what to do because she wanted to fight but she was also scared made her body shake a little, hungry and feeling so tired to from what she went threw. She thought about it for a few minutes and said in a whisper,"I am going to fight with you guys." The reason she choose to fight because she want revenge on them.
*Taken from ITV*
Not bad, Annie... Except for the fact that you copy and pasted certain words and phrases to fix your sentences. Which is bad. Just your friendly neighborhood gay boy!
04-Jun-2016 00:35:28
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