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Venom1383

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I'm gonna start writing Stories on here to practice writing/pass the time.

To start off easy, I'm thinking about writing a story with Sileo Umbra as the main charcter, telling some highlights from his assassin career. Ramsay Bolton is the king we deserve.

27-Aug-2015 03:09:35

Azigarath

Azigarath

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Just stopping by again, but I never got much feedback in my RP thread when I first posted it. May I ask again if any of you, who know RP obviously better than me, give it a look and perhaps mention the areas that are good, bad, need improving, and so on, if you have the time? Not expecting the entire thread to be read, but a quick glance over a few things would be appreciated. My RP thread's just bumped, it's called Hooks and Chains (RP).

Of course, I remember when Annie alluded to it in a post somewhere here, I try to remember everything.

27-Aug-2015 05:00:33

Inferi

Inferi

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It looked fine to me. The fact that there's a lot of stuff to it isn't bad at all, and you seem to have everything thought-out quite well. The thing that kept me from doing anything with it (apart from time, of course) is that the setting is a bit darker and more gritty than my preferred setting. That's what stood out the most when you first put it up, anyways.

The problem with roleplays here is that there's very few people, so if what you made doesn't appeal to enough there's really not much you can do. Like I said, there's nothing bad about it, but the people available are always a severely limiting factor when it comes to roleplays. Done in by the dubious doings of destiny.

27-Aug-2015 05:23:07

NotFishing

NotFishing

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Azigarath said :
Just stopping by again, but I never got much feedback in my RP thread when I first posted it. May I ask again if any of you, who know RP obviously better than me, give it a look and perhaps mention the areas that are good, bad, need improving, and so on, if you have the time? Not expecting the entire thread to be read, but a quick glance over a few things would be appreciated. My RP thread's just bumped, it's called Hooks and Chains (RP).

Personally, I was just weirded out by the fact that the world was a gigantic monster, and we had to eat its flesh and drink its blood.

It's definitely a unique idea, and I'm not going to criticize you for being original, but it was just so... disturbing. Beneath the gold, the Bitter Steel.

27-Aug-2015 05:26:41

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