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Lady Railly

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Added the next 3000 characters to chapter 9. I thought it would be the end of the chapter but no, I just have to write one more post.

I received a spark of inspiration and incentive this morning and decided to write the last 2000 characters. Chapter 9 is now complete!

04-Jan-2013 10:59:14 - Last edited on 04-Jan-2013 11:39:58 by Lady Railly

Lady Railly

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And the phase of not-writing-for-two-months-until-the-next-holiday begins, unfortunately.

13-Jan-2013 15:01:21

Areno3

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Hey Ruth.

Did you want to talk about that collaborative story here, or still by email?

17-Jan-2013 02:44:54

Azigarath

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Just finished the new posts. Not much to say, though.

But when Emma pulls the arrow out her back, you can't really do that, as the barbs are lodged behind flesh when the arrow enters a body. Now, I'm assuming she pulled the shaft so that it went downward and then she took the arrow out, though if the arrowhead was not barbed then I suppose plucking it out would work, too.

Also, dates aren't big fruit, nor do they hold water (I think); perhaps you meant figs or olives? I'm not sure as always.

Anyways, that's all for now, till next time.

17-Jan-2013 06:55:42

Lady Railly

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^ I researched dates and they are apparently full of water when they are ripe. I just double checked and I must have been mistaken when I thought they were big, I thought they were like figs, lol. They're actually more like grapes. xD It's not really that important to change right now, so I'll leave it. But I'll keep it in mind. Also, about the arrow, I didn't specify any barbs on it, but I guess normally you'd hunt people and animals with barbed arrows? And she had to ease it out very slowly. :S

^^ I'd prefer if we could still talk about it via email personally but it's entirely your choice, to be honest. Whatever works best for you. Also, like, no-one knows my real name on here. Don't use it too often.

17-Jan-2013 20:07:02