The archer who shoots Emma only fires one arrow, but I think he was dealt with by the other guy. If I was an archer, and I wanted to kill, I’d be releasing arrows as fast as possible.
I also wonder how the inhabitants of the desert could construct camps and bows, seeing as the wasteland lacks any resource for that very purpose. Sinew, wood, cloth, leather and such cannot come from a wasteland of sand. Palm is too soft and weak to make an effective stave, at least that’s what I think.
But, considering the story, I don’t think it is meant to be like that, it does seem to be some kind of dream world. Oh, and one last thing, sweet sap can be extracted from palm trees by sticking an object (probably tubular or with curved sides) into the bark so that the sap would gradually leak down the object and into a pot or something.
I also wonder why Emma does not pick a few of the palm leaves off the tree, a cluster at the end of a branch could act as an umbrella, some wild palms would certainly have low branches after all, but the species would be important too of course.
I would also suggest to use the environment as a weapon. You know, like, Emma could play dead, grab a handful of sand and then throw it into a hunter’s eyes/face to save herself, or take the advantage to steal from the blinded villain.
Just thought I’d say things like that, as I felt my commentary prior to this was perhaps too weak and limited, so hopefully this helps. That’s all for now, until next time.
19-Aug-2013 23:15:40