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Yam42

Yam42

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Don't get me wrong, I really enjoyed it!

And don't worry about criticism. We've all got stuff we need to work on. For instance, I write good dialogue according to some, but I need to work on making less lengthy and pointless expositions. ;)

11-Jun-2012 19:15:10 - Last edited on 11-Jun-2012 19:15:22 by Yam42

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Old Gnomish

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An enjoyable read so far, Railly. Perhaps it is a bit too coincidental at times, so ensure you try to keep the verisimilitude consistent throughout. Your opening paragraph, by contrast, is wonderful.

I admire your persistence when it comes to writing stories--I seem to lack that same drive. The improvement you've made as a writer from your first story is similarly impressive, and your stories are always entertaining. I look forward to reading the rest of this chapter and Chapter Four, whenever you add it. :)
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11-Jun-2012 20:37:25

Lady Railly

Lady Railly

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Today, I have written a new record of 7k characters. I am extremely proud of myself. Let this day be known that on the 16/06/12 I wrote 7,000 characters and 1,300 words.

Wow.

I'm sure that won't be much to some of you but it is to me. :D

16-Jun-2012 22:50:55

Yam42

Yam42

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Read up to what you have, and you've really clinched me here! *Dramatic Announcer Voice:* The plot thickens!

I also actually enjoy how you're posting the chapters in pieces. It's like a cliffhanger. "Tune in next week for the dramatic conclusion to chapter five!" Nicely done. As always, keep up the good work!

EDIT: I don't know what's gotten into me! I meant to recommend this on my thread weeks ago! Sorry for the wait. By the time you read this post, it will have been recommended.

21-Jun-2012 18:13:45 - Last edited on 21-Jun-2012 18:18:59 by Yam42

Lady Railly

Lady Railly

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Thank you for recommending me finally! :P And thank you for reading as always, I really appreciate it. :)

EDIT: It seems that writing dialogue makes me write even more than usual! I wrote 3.6k characters on Tuesday/Wednesday (can't remember which day) and now I've written around 4k characters. It says I have 8k characters on Word now (of chapter 5). :)

22-Jun-2012 07:38:00 - Last edited on 22-Jun-2012 22:23:16 by Lady Railly

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