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Yam42

Yam42

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I've read chapter one so far. I can see the parallels between your two inspirations, although I've never seem/read THG myself. Nicely done!

I just remembered the line about the sun and moon changing places. I love the language you used there.

07-Jun-2012 02:06:43

Lady Railly

Lady Railly

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Started chapter 3 a little. Not even a full post, but it's late at night and I should be heading off to bed. I did get 1.5k characters in though, which is over my minimum. :)

I have a busy night tonight, so like last night I have added just 1.5k characters to the story. Chapter Three is now on its way though, with one and a half posts complete. :)

07-Jun-2012 22:18:43 - Last edited on 08-Jun-2012 21:09:26 by Lady Railly

Lady Railly

Lady Railly

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Added a bit more, also bump! :)

Added a good 1.6k characters to make a cliffhanger and 3 complete posts.

I did the maths and it seems that this week (from last Sunday to today) I've written a complete chapter. From chapter two (2.5 posts) to chapter 3 (3 posts). That's pretty good. :)

Even more now. I decided that because tomorrow is the start of school again, I won't have much time for writing. So I wrote about 2.5k characters (it says in Word anyway). It pushed my posts from 3 to 4.5 for this chapter. After writing the last 1000 characters, the chapter will fortunately end how I wanted it to. :)

09-Jun-2012 21:47:49 - Last edited on 10-Jun-2012 21:20:01 by Lady Railly

Yam42

Yam42

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I read everything you've put up so far, Railly. The flow is a bit clumsy in some spots. Don't worry too much about that because it kept me entertained, and that's what I care about the most! It actually reminds me of a few indy RPGs I used to play on the computer, so for me this story has a feel that is very pleasant because it evokes those memories.

Keep up the good work!

11-Jun-2012 17:15:25

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