I read everything you've put up so far, Railly. The flow is a bit clumsy in some spots. Don't worry too much about that because it kept me entertained, and that's what I care about the most! It actually reminds me of a few indy RPGs I used to play on the computer, so for me this story has a feel that is very pleasant because it evokes those memories.
Keep up the good work!
11-Jun-2012 17:15:25