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23-Jan-2008 00:25:28

Yeah, I agree with Para about the poetry. Some of the lines are too long and don't flow right and it seems sort of choppy and forced. Also, it seems too short and it doesn't leave me thinking much about what it means. Poetry's hard. I'm not very good at it myself.

24-Jan-2008 01:26:10

29-Jan-2008 01:58:09

07-Feb-2008 06:28:41

42.
I guess I'll let this die. Randomly posts shorts in other places.

12-Feb-2008 04:03:13

20-Feb-2008 06:11:10

I don't want it to die, I just don't care too much about it. I had a bunch of ideas for shorts when I posted it, which I no longer have, so it's not as important. If you want to finish reading, or keep this bumped for other purposes, by all means go ahead.

20-Feb-2008 06:21:28

23-Feb-2008 22:12:30

Y'know, I might keep this up.
I've got some new ideas for shorts in the near future.

27-Feb-2008 02:17:27

04-Mar-2008 03:31:24