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06-Jan-2008 00:58:46
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Sorry, I was starting to get really loopy feeling from my painkiller meds and had to go take a brief nappy.
I might actually get something posted on here, now.
I might actually get something posted on here, now.
06-Jan-2008 01:16:54
Bookmark of Bleh.
Bleh.
I'll read THIS, instead of Starlit Blade, simply because I can't find it on my profile
Bleh.
I'll read THIS, instead of Starlit Blade, simply because I can't find it on my profile
06-Jan-2008 01:18:38
Read Starlit Blade since it's RIGHT THERE on the FRONT PAGE.
06-Jan-2008 01:20:27
Your short - pretty good. One section I think you could do a little better. "...golden sunlight. The golden..." Golden is used twice in quick succession. Try for another word.
06-Jan-2008 02:03:04
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