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That was quite an amazing tale! 5/5

04-Jan-2009 05:57:40

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09-Jan-2009 02:02:52

I read both the story and squeal some time ago, but something I either forgot to mention or didn't notice was that you have spelled "Zamorak" wrong. There's only one "M". Plus, it says in RuneScape lore that the gods cannot personally interfere with life in RuneScape, and you have him doing just that. Because you are not writing for accuracy and just enjoyment, it's not really a problem, though. It was a good story and since you're not getting it published, it doesn't have to be 100% accurate. Makes it more interesting to read anyways.

Other than that, though, it was a good read. Obviously it has its errors, (especially with spelling and grammar) but nothing is perfect. Like I said (somewhere) on the other thread, for a high school student this is pretty good work.

10-Jan-2009 00:43:45

thanks I dont actually remember when I wrote it, might not have been high school, not really sure

10-Jan-2009 04:33:24

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