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There's that frowny face again...
Glad you liked it. I don't actually think it's all that great. I think it could really be better, little spit and polish.
Elly

22-Jun-2009 05:00:52

phew I finally finished... I like it so far, but you need to explain some stuff.(like the prohecy and Adam and Rachel falling in love after one conversation). I like the description and dialogue. Keep on writing! ~~L‡Ñk

22-Jun-2009 08:04:35 - Last edited on 22-Jun-2009 08:04:57 by KratosAURlON

u got an issue with frozny faces!? :O
its just tht i thought Rachel or Adam was going to die!
now i know its just tht pain in the butt count

22-Jun-2009 14:00:48

22-Jun-2009 14:34:27

Bookmarked. Such a captivating first paragraph!
I am sorry for my username and any offence or upset it may cause you, please know that I am looking for ways to have it changed.

22-Jun-2009 18:11:48

write more!!!
bump

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