Well sorry about not posting in a while, this is just one of the threads I read and then go and then read again. Anyways so it takes me a while to finish reading everything. Well I thought I might as well read some and give you a pit of input.
So starting with "Under the Tiger Sky." Well to start off I've noticed that its not as comical as the rest. And I like how you teamed up with Die to write it.
HAHA!! I loved your troll play it was quite entertaining to read. Plus the trolls acted like real, stupid, and ugly trolls. My only promblem was the Pantomime Sheep Ends because I have no idea what Pantomime is, but thats my fault.
Nice little peom of yours. "Wimtumber Wonderland" if you want to know what i'm talking about. Anyways I think its nice but the third stanza ruins it. Suppose it could be just me.
With your 100-words contest entries your first wasn't bad, but the second I didn't really get. The third was my favorite, nice peom it was. And the last one was good also.
Well thats all for now i'm going to watch Doctor Who.
31-Jul-2009 19:15:41
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