Thanks so much, Englishkid! It's always great to get some good feedback, and you never disappoint. I'm so glad you enjoyed those new pieces.
And of course I'd be glad to take a look at your new story.
Dreamweaver
I read the first some and the stories on page 40. They're great :-) I must say that you develop, if you compare oldest and newest stories. You really have got a talent!
You're most kind, Da Vom Tembl. I do agree that I've improved somewhat over the time of writing these (at least I hope I have). Of course, that suggests that I should go back and rewrite some of those earlier works... maybe not a bad idea...
Your time spent reading and commenting is much appreciated!
Dreamweaver