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Kai of RS

Kai of RS

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Read the first page . I look forward to reading 2nd page when I next have time. So far I like the diary setting of the whole story. Like when a soldier writes in his diary during a war in real life. This has been a fantastic read and I feel you could improve with description. Using describing words etc.. Other than that the story is brilliant. Bravo ^_^
¸,.-*º»¸,.-*º»¸,.-*º»¸,.-*º» Stay Positve! Stay Kind! «º*-.,¸«º*-.,¸«º*-.,¸«º*-.,¸
«º*-.,¸«º*-.,¸«º*-.,¸«º*-.,¸ Stay Honest! Stay You! ¸,.-*º»¸,.-*º»¸,.-*º»¸,.-*º»

11-Sep-2011 09:21:29

Oss SpyV2

Oss SpyV2

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^Exactly. I'm considering writing a memoir (to go on the forums, of course) about my experiences with the clan. UNSC, born and raised.
~!~ Oss Spy, Captain of the former UNSC Marine Corps ~!~
The Army is a great experience; it sucks so much that literally nothing else will seem as bad in comparison.

14-Sep-2011 02:59:35

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