Okay, Oss Spy, I'm going to agree a LITTLE with Psycho. He seems to be a bit foolish, but he has this right: Making fun of somebody's Runescape account on the forums isn't funny. I'm saying this as a guy with level 28 combat. This is a story forum. If you want something to mock flamers about, ask them to show their writing. Seems more appropriate, is all.
Seems like an okay story. I'm not a fan of the Script format, but it might work here, we'll see.
/\Grr...if Halo has taken the word 'Covenant' off the list of options, I am depressed this day. A bad videogame has damaged writing potential.
EDIT: By the way, the 'People who made sense' thing is kind of obnoxious. You only list one person, a person who said nothing but positive stuff about you're story. In doing that, you're pretty much saying that only those who compliment your story have any writing taste. You should either review this or remove it altogether.
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