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This is the forum. I leave my Log open to the public because I trust that people are mature enough not to make fun of it.
This is the forum. I leave my Log open to the public because I trust that people are mature enough not to make fun of it.
09-Feb-2010 18:29:23
except all of your fatal mistakes, its an alright story..
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It's based on two dead clans, and thank you for redeeming yourself.
08-Feb-2010 21:06:49
Last edited on 08-Feb-2010 21:10:31 by Yenklet
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I wouldnt make fun of his account if he hadn't started with me, I don't like to insult people, but I won't let anyone walk away when they insult me
Script format was easy at the time, and since you're looking through a memory (and I didn't have any time), I chose whatever the hell I could
. About the people who made sense, I meant the people who read the rules. He is one of the few who didn't flame me for no reason.
08-Feb-2010 21:16:50
Last edited on 08-Feb-2010 21:17:53 by Yenklet
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I know it isn't great, and I know I could do better, but it's the time factor (and my age, I turned 15 as of September '09, so just subtract the date I started posting.) I'm not much for beginnings (nor ends, to be honest), but I appreciate your honesty. You seem like a fairly intelligent person
. I agree about nobody wanting to read the beginning, which is why i prefer writing short stories
09-Feb-2010 17:47:37
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It's not an excuse, but I've been eye deep in crap for a while now. I have to vent somehow without asploding (new word). My grammar is great as far as I've been able to tell -.-
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It's based on two dead clans, and thank you for redeeming yourself.
08-Feb-2010 21:06:49
Last edited on 08-Feb-2010 21:10:31 by Yenklet
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I wouldnt make fun of his account if he hadn't started with me, I don't like to insult people, but I won't let anyone walk away when they insult me
Script format was easy at the time, and since you're looking through a memory (and I didn't have any time), I chose whatever the hell I could
. About the people who made sense, I meant the people who read the rules. He is one of the few who didn't flame me for no reason.
08-Feb-2010 21:16:50
Last edited on 08-Feb-2010 21:17:53 by Yenklet
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I know it isn't great, and I know I could do better, but it's the time factor (and my age, I turned 15 as of September '09, so just subtract the date I started posting.) I'm not much for beginnings (nor ends, to be honest), but I appreciate your honesty. You seem like a fairly intelligent person
. I agree about nobody wanting to read the beginning, which is why i prefer writing short stories
09-Feb-2010 17:47:37
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It's not an excuse, but I've been eye deep in crap for a while now. I have to vent somehow without asploding (new word). My grammar is great as far as I've been able to tell -.-
12-Feb-2010 22:07:08
"What is this crap?" isn't hard criticism. Hard criticism is when you give people blunt critique, not when you insult their stories. Just saying.
Age really shouldn't be an excuse. I turned 14 last December.
Thanks for taking my critique politely, by the way. You story isn't that bad, but I can be harsh in certain cases.
Age really shouldn't be an excuse. I turned 14 last December.
Thanks for taking my critique politely, by the way. You story isn't that bad, but I can be harsh in certain cases.
13-Feb-2010 17:13:27
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