"The soldiers were laid to waste too."
I don't like how often this has the same "to" sound appear. In this case, it would be better to say "as well" and keep the original formatting, because it is saying that the walls fell, and so did the soldiers.
"The soldiers were laid waste to as well."
Also, both sentences might be combined.
"The walls stood to defend the town from assault, yet they fell, and with this, so did the soldiers."
03-Apr-2010 03:42:39
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Aidyn Levet