I just read 'To Douse The Sun', I really dig that concept and I dig that abstract poeticism in stories - reminds me of old Victorian poetry, you know, especially with concerns for mortality, and the concept is very similar to the school of thought at that time questioning mortality, which was a nod to Buddhists 'Impermanence' - which is exciting me at the minute (my Rogues of Ardougne is written based on those principles).
You might find it interesting, actually - there was a man who was very keen on the 'embrace death' thing, and he thought being around corpses a lot was a good way to like, appreciate life better, and he had his garden and house filled with preserved corpses, as ornaments, like. Hahaha. Which is a bit far for me, like, hahahaha.
Uh... I haven't read the rest of your stories yet but the poetic angle you're taking on that one, you might enjoy the works of Fredrico Garcia Lorca. The way you approach sentence structure reminds me of some of his works - he was a spanish poet part of the Generation of '21, really good.
My only problem with the story was, uh... Well, it seemed to step out of palette sometimes to catch scientific elements - like when she's talking about how we breathe better in the cold, or whatever. It steps out of theme a bit. But, I like it, yeah. Cool!
25-Sep-2011 16:38:20