And... *Drum roll* I've posted 'Jasmine'. I don't know if I like it or not, it's just so different to how I usualy write. Either way, if you could tell me what you think.
And I was going to put your threads, this one and Well Told Tales, in the Endorsements. Just gimmie a message if that's OK.
12-Apr-2010 08:57:48
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12-Apr-2010 08:58:31
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Eri Vi
Hey, Logan. Sorry I haven't been back with the feedback I promised. Life's gotten a bit hectic the last few days. I expect I'll find some free time this week, but I don't know for sure. Still feel free to post any questions on one of my threads if you have any or anything.
No problem Chuk - I've had the same problem lately. I have to finish school in the next month and learn everything I need to know from highschool, so it's going to be rough, lol.
Anyways, I'll try to check back here occasionally. Thanks. ^^
Agreed with Elite: on the vaguely erotic name of course
I loved them, all very special, out-of-the-box writing. The paragraph issue I mentioned to you doesn't detract, of course. My personal favourite is the guitar one, being a musician myself
As for the paragraph issue, I believe it's just part of my style. Good or bad, I fear that if I take pains to alter it, the flow of the story will be damaged rather than repaired, lol.
By the way, do you play guitar, or is it some other instrument?
23-Apr-2010 19:39:02
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23-Apr-2010 19:39:14
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Logan Shafts
Yes I play guitar. What style do you usually play on Piano?
I generally play alternative/classical on my guitar. I have three guitars - a nylon string classical mini acoustic, a steel string LHL acoustic, and an Ibanez Electric.
All of them were given to me, lol, so I got lucky. Im about to buy a new acoustic though, lol.