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Thank You's
The first thankyou could only really go to Icedog1003. He has been a fan of my storys since my first one 3 or 4 years ago, but much more importantly he has been a briliant friend. He has inspired me to write many of the chapters in the Nooby First story (The Stone of Doom), convinced me to finish that story, and to start this one. So thank you Icedog
The second thankyou must go to Christputtoc2 - (Puttoc is his bio) A few years ago he wrote a briliant Noob story story that inspired me to start writing in the first place. He helped me I as discoved my writing style. So thank you Chris
The third thankyou goes to a person who is currently called VegasPro10, but who I call Tom. He has been a great friend and fan of the Nooby Series, he has helped convince me to write chapters when I just don't feel like it, with his 'Scap Chapters'. He's helped me come up with idea's for the story, and for jokes. So thank you Tom
Reviews
This is a place on the thread I shall place some of my favouite coments, and reviews.
RuneScape's Murderer:
This story is so far, a great improvement from the Stone of Doom, in this one the plot is coming around nicely
I think it is still overly random, but I can talk! Look at The Saradomin Adventures xD So so far, I give it 9/10! Congratz
DarkRose826:
This should be one of the leading Noob stories. Unlike most Noob stories this has gone through a series, and the storyline stays exciting, and it doesn't drift from the funniness into seriousness like most Noob stories. I find it nice that you write in script, So it's easier to understand. I'm not trying to criticize Prose but it's sometimes hard to read with the words all jumbled up together like so:
Chapter 1a - The Worst Birthday Ever
Nooby - Ready or not! Here I come!
Ice - Ugh... do we have to play Hide and Seek?
Nooby - It's my birthday!
Ice - Actually it's mine...
Nooberela - It is Ice's birthday Nooby
The first thankyou could only really go to Icedog1003. He has been a fan of my storys since my first one 3 or 4 years ago, but much more importantly he has been a briliant friend. He has inspired me to write many of the chapters in the Nooby First story (The Stone of Doom), convinced me to finish that story, and to start this one. So thank you Icedog
The second thankyou must go to Christputtoc2 - (Puttoc is his bio) A few years ago he wrote a briliant Noob story story that inspired me to start writing in the first place. He helped me I as discoved my writing style. So thank you Chris
The third thankyou goes to a person who is currently called VegasPro10, but who I call Tom. He has been a great friend and fan of the Nooby Series, he has helped convince me to write chapters when I just don't feel like it, with his 'Scap Chapters'. He's helped me come up with idea's for the story, and for jokes. So thank you Tom
Reviews
This is a place on the thread I shall place some of my favouite coments, and reviews.
RuneScape's Murderer:
This story is so far, a great improvement from the Stone of Doom, in this one the plot is coming around nicely
I think it is still overly random, but I can talk! Look at The Saradomin Adventures xD So so far, I give it 9/10! Congratz
DarkRose826:
This should be one of the leading Noob stories. Unlike most Noob stories this has gone through a series, and the storyline stays exciting, and it doesn't drift from the funniness into seriousness like most Noob stories. I find it nice that you write in script, So it's easier to understand. I'm not trying to criticize Prose but it's sometimes hard to read with the words all jumbled up together like so:
Chapter 1a - The Worst Birthday Ever
Nooby - Ready or not! Here I come!
Ice - Ugh... do we have to play Hide and Seek?
Nooby - It's my birthday!
Ice - Actually it's mine...
Nooberela - It is Ice's birthday Nooby
10-Jan-2010 16:56:44 - Last edited on 21-Dec-2010 16:08:02 by Snakus Viper
Reviews continued:
Nooby - If it was Ice's birthday I’d have written down it on my calendar (checks, it has "Nooby's Birthday" written on it) see! It's my birthday!
Nooberela - It has "Nooby's Birthday" written on everyday
Nooby - I love birthdays!
Noobio - I love cake!
You keep people laughing and wanting more.
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Nooby - If it was Ice's birthday I’d have written down it on my calendar (checks, it has "Nooby's Birthday" written on it) see! It's my birthday!
Nooberela - It has "Nooby's Birthday" written on everyday
Nooby - I love birthdays!
Noobio - I love cake!
You keep people laughing and wanting more.
Thread Rules:
1. No Spaming
2. No offencive Language
3. You may ask me to read a thread
4. You may post to say new chapters of your story are out
5. Free bumps are aloud
6. Don't let the Thread get attack by the Page 51 monster!
7. All Jagex rules apply
8. Every fan of the story, if they so desire, has the right to make a Scab Chapter Series.
You may Now post!
10-Jan-2010 17:25:38 - Last edited on 23-Dec-2010 11:41:51 by Snakus Viper
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