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Serene End
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Serene End

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Well, I suppose you can say that. :P

Like I said in his profile: "However, he believes that somebody out let the plague out. This gives him indignation to find the one."

So, yeah, Chapter 2 will have violence, I assure you. o:

…,.»·•º°°º•·«.,…,.•*´¨¨†hë ènd îš ønlÿ †hè ßègïnnïng,…,„.«•*¨`*•.,..
The end
is only
the beginning...

11-May-2010 15:58:08 - Last edited on 11-May-2010 15:58:45 by Serene End

Serene End
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Serene End

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Thanks. :)

Now for the others...>.>

*runs and hides in bush, waiting for others without them knowing I'm here*


…,.»·•º°°º•·«.,…,.•*´¨¨†hë ènd îš ønlÿ †hè ßègïnnïng,…,„.«•*¨`*•.,..
The end
is only
the beginning...

11-May-2010 16:14:49

Smallay

Smallay

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Here we go!

Name:Lite Vertak (yeah im terrible at names)
Race: human
Age: 16
Birth date: who knows?
Gender: Male
Weapon: Chaotic longsword
Good/Evil: good
Appearance: White with Black hair 5'8 feet tall blue eyes wears black dragonhide with a karils coif
Personality: Bit annoying at times other than that a nice person
Short History: his family died to the plague he went around trying to survive He ended up in Daemonheim for a year where he gained his Chatoic longsword (im not good at this kind of thing ok?)
Family:all died to whatever it was the plague?

11-May-2010 16:39:11 - Last edited on 12-May-2010 16:34:46 by Smallay

Serene End
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Serene End

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Hmm, as for a first, I'll accept under one thing:

I need to edit for the following things

1. I must know which sides he is on, Good or Evil.
2. This is just something that I don't require, but it is nice to have. I'd like a little more detail on appearance. NOT that I require it, it's just more convenient. o.o

But if the first one is completed without the second is fine.

…,.»·•º°°º•·«.,…,.•*´¨¨†hë ènd îš ønlÿ †hè ßègïnnïng,…,„.«•*¨`*•.,..
The end
is only
the beginning...

11-May-2010 17:23:26

Ark Von Doom

Ark Von Doom

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Ahh... What a snazzy new thread. *leaps into a bush at random* HA! FOUND YOUUUUUUU!

Poor Modello :( Somehow the little girl being there makes it even worse... Talk about emotional scarring O_o Great prologue!

* * *

Modello: What goes on?

Alyssa: Someone set us up the bomb.

Modello: What?

Alyssa: We get signal. Main screen turn on.

Modello: It's you.

Tamir: How are you gentlemen. All your base are belong to us. You are on the way to destruction.

Modello: What you say?

Tamir: There is no chance to survive make your time. Hahahaha...

* * *

Richard: "All he cares about is making a name for himself...and his hair of course."

Bart: A name for his hair... Billiam E. Groomsworthy! Whaddya think Forscythe?

Forscythe:...

* * *

Tamir: "He has a black goatee."

Let's all scream 'He's a villain' in five... four... :P

Leila: "..." Errr... General history ^_^

I can see why Shiazi's role was taken :D Though Leila's not a cyborg :(

12-May-2010 01:31:28 - Last edited on 12-May-2010 01:32:08 by Ark Von Doom

Seph
Jun Member 2008

Seph

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Yea, she's a terminator. :P




...But better more, which type of special effects does she have? T2 graphics? T3? Or is she l33tly up to date?



...If you think installing Windows '95 into her would be her limit in technology, she's old. REEEAAAAAALLLLYYY old. O_o



But hey! She still has that Pong system installing in, right? Everyone get out your controllers. >.>



...Sheetrock. There, I said it. -.-



~Insane Soule
Void Knight, Priest of Guthix, Wielder of the Ancient Magyks, Complete idiot.
"How Can Mirrors Be Real If Our Eyes Aren't Real?" -Jaden Smith

12-May-2010 06:31:23 - Last edited on 12-May-2010 06:32:35 by Seph

Serene End
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Serene End

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^is not an idiot. =.=

Eh, I'm bored. O_o Guess what guys, chapter's in a day early.

And Ark, how did you find me!? *jumps out of bush and runs to another one* HA! He won't find me this time! ^.^
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Chapter 1: A Cold Touch

This was the city of loss, Avdima. At an eagle's eye look, the city was separated from the poor and the wealthy. The poor distinct was a true hell hole. Rats roamed the streets freely, biting at the bare feet of those who once lived and thrived in their previous world. Boards of woods barely covered the inside of gray stone structures.

A ray of light from the lantern in the sky bled through the rather large gaps in between the wooden boards of the houses. Men, women, and young children would have to endure blistering summers, and take in bone-chilling winters. All they had to warm them during the bitterly cold nights was a fire. But even that wasn't enough. Many of the neighbors died because they were too poor to afford a doctor.

And the rich folks looked down upon them whenever they pleaded for money. The bitter wicked glare was all they got. It was like staring into the eyes of a devil. Their eyes would bleed through you until you submitted to their will. Men's faces were drenched with hair, long hair with even longer beards. Their hair wouldn't stop growing, they were almost like roots growing from a tree.

The rich had everything you could want. Glided trimmed houses, golden pathways, fancy clothes. Everything. A cape of white and gold cloaked the houses in royalty. Laughter of whom was richer littered the air. While women and snobby children would just laugh their woes away at the poor. Their laughs could cut a blade directly at the heart of those who begged. They tried, but nobody listened. Their cries were deaf to the people's ears.
The end
is only
the beginning...

12-May-2010 14:11:41 - Last edited on 12-May-2010 21:48:53 by Serene End

Serene End
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Gleaming fountains of wealth made water dance for the rich. They laughed, not caring for those who must struggle with staying alive. Luckily for the poor, there is one person that did care. She would visit them everyday, as happy as ever. Her face was glowed with a smile. Everybody said she was cold, selfish. But this was a completely different side of her.

She had dark brown hair that was up to her neck with a few bangs covering the sides of her face. Her pale blue eyes met with the unhealthy, faded eyes of the poor men and women. Her pale skinned hands glowed green. The man in front of her had a deep cut on his left shoulder after he and a knight got into an argument. The knight drew his blade and swung it at the man.

The blood from the wound dripped down silently. His teeth would herd every second when the red life liquid would drip from the wound. She sat down next to the man and her glowing hands came close to the man's wounded shoulder. "Hold still. This may hurt for a moment." she whispered to the man.

He nodded his head, gritting his teeth as well. "It's alright...as long as it takes the wound away..." he quickly replied. His locked teeth let loose. She drew breath in and let the air out, like in a sigh. She pressed her glowing hand against the open wound of the man. His once unlocked teeth quickly shut back closed as a mask of agony cloaked his face in suffering.

He let out a crying moan out as his wound felt like the orb of heat from above fell down upon it. His irises were imprisoned in darkness by his eyelids being tightly sealed. "Damn it all!" he cried.

A drop of sweat poured down from the young woman's forehead. "Almost done." she assured.

Thirty seconds of punishment went on like time had literally frozen. It felt like an eternity to the man, and to the young woman trying to help him. But when half a minute that seemed like forever finally halted, she removed her hand from the man's shoulder and the wound had completely vanished.
The end
is only
the beginning...

12-May-2010 14:16:46

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