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Ogdred

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If you're looking for feedback on that new one, then I can see that even though it wasn't "horror," you just couldn't resist a murderous plot.
The ending was brilliant, and wrapped off an amazing short story.

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02-Dec-2008 01:16:43

A White Wolf

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Why thank you. :-) I rather liked it myself.
And of course, feedback is always appreciated.
I think I'll go post some adverts on the SD to say I have a new little piece.
And oh, need to add it to Table of Contents.

02-Dec-2008 03:26:38

CaptChekaka

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My review: it's good.
My rating: 10/10
^_^

-- Chek

02-Dec-2008 03:37:56

A White Wolf

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>->...

02-Dec-2008 03:40:10

CaptChekaka

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What?
-- Chek

02-Dec-2008 03:41:31

6c91921auvd

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Very nice, it's been a while since I've read a convincing fight scene such as that.
*Is now wary of his firends*
Once again you make me edgy, thanks Wolfeh.

02-Dec-2008 03:50:56

A White Wolf

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My pleasure. *beams*
I enjoy making people edgy. It's what I do. Apologies for the short length, but hey, anything is better than something, amirite?

02-Dec-2008 04:11:04

Chuk

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Yes, you're rite, though I have yet to read. *Goes to read right before bed*

04-Dec-2008 05:40:47

A White Wolf

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You've probably seen it already. It's the short example I made for TIGA's 4000 char short.

04-Dec-2008 05:43:10

Chuk

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I hadn't read it before that I'm aware of. I don't remember it at all, anyway. And I noticed a couple things.
Firstly, last sentence of first paragraph of second post. Repetition of "yet again." Sounds awkward.
The next paragraph, "let her friend in on." That just seems out of place, too much like slang to fit in well with prose. Find a synonym, maybe?

04-Dec-2008 05:46:59

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