Snowbuster: Wow, fantastic entry! The description is beautiful—one thing moving seamlessly into the next. Sure, the premise is a little cliché, but the execution is fantastic. A few of the punctuation marks seem a little weird, but the flow of words was excellent. Overall, this is a fantastic entry, and seeing you grow over the course of the contest is quite incredible. Great job, Snow.
Lebbeh: This is interesting, and different. Eleven people are trapped on an island and trying to figure out to survive. I think you did yourself no justice by leaving it like that. Nothing is really answered. Why is the man so negligent to give out has name? Why were they all out at sea? I know these questions would take a while to answer, but brushing the surface would be nice. Besides that, it was well written, but you gave a lot to be desired that just did*’t show in this entry. Your writing is still great, Lebbeh.
Aeraie: You’re goal was to make this horrifying, right? Well you succeeded. From the moment the story started to the end, it left me at the edge of my seat. I was always curious as to what would happen next, and at some point, I was left frightened. This did*’t need big, fancy descriptions to aid you. The way it is written is perfect. I usually don’t connect well to writing like this. I may sound bias in that way, but the fact that you can make an entry like that interesting to me is fantastic. Great job, Aerie!
The placing for this final round is as follows:
1st: Aeraie
2nd: Snowbuster
3rd: Lebbeh
The final scores are as follows:
Overall scores:
Aeraie: 1427
Lebbeh: 1580
Snowbuster: 1976
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