Mors Et Vita: You surprise me every time I see your writing. You’re not very huge on big plots, but you can entrance people with your words. With such a short entry, it is very hard to have an impact with words, but you kept me hooked with each word. I was quite impressed to see your style alive even in only a hundred words. Great job saying all you needed to; that definitely seems hard for you. Not sure what else to say to be honest.
Mr Jeeves84: Haha! This is quite interesting and definitely different than what I was expecting. This is a great use of dialogue. The once-in-a-lifetime weather reference was quite clever, so great job with choosing the right things to say. This is a quality entry, and with very few words, there isn’t much more for me to say.
The winner of this twist round will have claim to the open spot in the competition. That winner is…
Mors Et Vita!
Congratulations! Round three will be posted soon.
As for you, Mr Jeeves, I think you may still be able to secure a place in the contest. One Bourbon has not shown his face around here since round one, so I am going to give him a few days to show himself. If he doesn’t in five days, you will be taking his place. (Round three needs eight people. You’ll see why in a few minutes.)
13-Oct-2011 16:12:21