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Vacu Dallah

Vacu Dallah

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Hey Xan...

Ariel set foot onto the dead-silent grounds. A cold vibration like ants slowed up her spine and left her littered with goose-bumps.

any better?


I apologize for my original trash, I do not know why it was so horrid compared to how I normally write. I was not pressured or nervous, there is no excuse, I do not see why I did not write good.

12-Oct-2011 20:40:30

[#IBFOD3N0L]

[#IBFOD3N0L]

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I found this entry rather difficult to write, as I'm never a fan of writing very brief pieces. That is not to say that this wasn't enjoyable, just challenging.

Anyway, here it is:

She was tall, and her hair enveloped her skull in luxurious gold.

She was young, and her skin absorbed the colors of her world so she became the vessel of their beauty.

She was strong, and her bones captured echoes of the night and released them throbbing to the beat of her heart.

He was cruel, and his mind was ensnared within vines of bitter rejection, resentment burning through deformed wires of solitude.

She was broken, and her skeleton was drifting on an infinite stream towards a forever shining light, his angry tears uniting with the river below her apparition.

13-Oct-2011 00:04:43 - Last edited on 13-Oct-2011 00:04:53 by [#IBFOD3N0L]

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