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Fentom11

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i stand corrected.i see clift hangers.
*punches brick wall*
nice adds

13-Jun-2008 21:56:38

Salireon

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*sees cliffhanger*

*bangs head on brick wall*

15-Jun-2008 01:56:27

Slay Orc 681

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New story! Awesome!
Bookmarked.
I look forward to reading this, effendi.

--Guard

15-Jun-2008 05:51:39

Shloppi

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Seriously, what do you people understand under 'cliffhangers'?

To me, a cliffhanger ends with a sentence like: "At last, the truth had been revealed. It was..."
Riekan ends his scenes, so they can't really be called cliffhangers.
Other than that, great adds

15-Jun-2008 13:17:20

ramrod316

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if i was Riekan id end a post with some1 being hanged over a cliff, just to c the reaction.

15-Jun-2008 17:57:17

Flannel Face

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Wow, I really like your story.
You have a lot of creativity.
If you would like, you can join my competition.
Come take a look at my thread.
QFC: 14-15-998-56885782

15-Jun-2008 18:00:48

[#5AGSIZET9]

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sorry guys, I'll have to postpone the adds for one more night...Monday, I promise. Also, thanks Camelot, I'll check it out. And thanks to you, Skoeter, for your support.
Edit: Ramrod, that's a good idea.
Edit2: Guard! Welcome!

16-Jun-2008 06:10:11 - Last edited on 16-Jun-2008 06:11:26 by [#5AGSIZET9]

[#YQHPZ4ORX]

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Hm. I wonder who the stranger may be....
•·.·´¯`·.·•Anton, The Last of the Goblin Clerics•·.·´¯`·.·•

16-Jun-2008 21:58:09

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punkles

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*cant keep quiet anymore*
I've read all your stories over the past month, I must compliment you on your improval.
One suggestion:
Idk about you, but I find it hard to think under pressure. Try keeping a notebook around to write anything you think of.
And maybe save up 4 or 5 posts, so you can get a whole chapter in at once.

17-Jun-2008 05:26:00 - Last edited on 17-Jun-2008 05:29:11 by punkles

Slay Orc 681

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I've read the first page so far, and you talent certainly hasn't dulled at all. Superb writing, effendi. I'm going to continue reading in a couple of minutes.
Also, I like how you welcome me but barely acknowledge anyone else when they post here.

--Guard

17-Jun-2008 05:31:02

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