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14-Oct-2007 20:57:54
Well, I'm up to page 12 so far, so I don't know how it turns out yet, but ill be back later to finish reading
Also, a technical note:
"Zach reached for a fragmentation grenade, but then stopped himself. If his target was underwater, what good would grenades do? He sighed and closed the door."
As the brother of a gun-nut (well, he's not a gun-nut so much as a "things-that-go-boom"-nut), I have learned that grenades might not explode so well underwater, but the pressure wave is still extreamely deadly, and overall grenades would do MORE damage to a person underwater
Also, a technical note:
"Zach reached for a fragmentation grenade, but then stopped himself. If his target was underwater, what good would grenades do? He sighed and closed the door."
As the brother of a gun-nut (well, he's not a gun-nut so much as a "things-that-go-boom"-nut), I have learned that grenades might not explode so well underwater, but the pressure wave is still extreamely deadly, and overall grenades would do MORE damage to a person underwater
15-Oct-2007 02:20:12
(Flicks off Trio0 off of Gamefreak's shoulder)
Count that as a help
Count that as a help
15-Oct-2007 02:21:34
Well, I've just finished reading it all
Pretty good, I'll give it overall 9/10.
Couple of things I guess i should say - 1st, I knew who hired Zach from the moment I realized who his target was, and 2nd, i realised this was something to do with Sponge Bob from the moment i read the title
Next, I've decided to buy the story all the chocolate I can afford
*Hands over a small bar*
Ok, so I'm not really that rich! Its the thought that counts, right? right?
Last, A small criticizm:
"'The jamming device, cap’n. It was knocked off.' At that moment, the green dot on the radar that signified the second submarine slowly began to move."
Well, apart from that most jamming devices would be INSIDE the submarine, not outside where they can be knocked off... there's the fact that submarines use Sonar, not Radar
ooo, did I get 650th post? I'm awesome like that
Pretty good, I'll give it overall 9/10.
Couple of things I guess i should say - 1st, I knew who hired Zach from the moment I realized who his target was, and 2nd, i realised this was something to do with Sponge Bob from the moment i read the title
Next, I've decided to buy the story all the chocolate I can afford
*Hands over a small bar*
Ok, so I'm not really that rich! Its the thought that counts, right? right?
Last, A small criticizm:
"'The jamming device, cap’n. It was knocked off.' At that moment, the green dot on the radar that signified the second submarine slowly began to move."
Well, apart from that most jamming devices would be INSIDE the submarine, not outside where they can be knocked off... there's the fact that submarines use Sonar, not Radar
ooo, did I get 650th post? I'm awesome like that
15-Oct-2007 05:41:15 - Last edited on 15-Oct-2007 05:44:47 by TrioZero
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