Aye slave (Gamefreak) Can I like NOT review your story?
1- It's uber funny and cool.
2- I can't see any errors (Maybe 'cuz I'm blinded by the chocolate fountain)
3- It's too long.
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numbered days huh... thats not very nice... but then you are jealous so i can't complain hehehe
†~if at first you don't succeed, kick it, then nerf it~†
†~there are no such things as survivors just people i haven't killed yet~†
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