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» The Pineapple Under the Sea <
> The 4th installment of the Codename: Zach series. »
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UPDATE: (November 1st, 2010) I am back! I'm working this week on revising and improving this story for you guys. It is very slow work, so bear with me. I think the final product will be worth the wait! I'm also working on several other projects that I will post separately in time. I'd love if you left a comment of support, appreciation, or chocolate-giving! Stay classy, RSF.

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Credentials »»
»Word Slinger of Ye Olde Story Guild
_»Ink Maestro of The New Age Writers
__»Diamond Writer Of The Bovine Grading System
___»Maestro of The Amethyst Library
____»Supreme Writer of The Writer's Pen
_____»Facetious of the Emerald Stylus
______»Pen Master of The Golden Pen
_______»Omega Pen of The Writer's Temple
________»Original Member of The Incredibly Gifted Authors
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About the Author »»
Hiya! The name's Gamefreak318, though I usually just go by Game or Zachy. I'm a 15-year-old living in good ol' Eastern US. I've been around these forums for a lot longer than most people know. Oh, here's a few things about me!
• Mountain Dew, Dr. Pepper, candy corn, and saucy pizza are my lifeblood.
• Britain is my love.
• And I'm not patriotic in the least.
• I like Dwight Schrute, and the word "onomatopoeia".
• I don't like semicolons, or the French.
• And I like to write. No duh. :]

• And I would absolutely love it if you read my story.
» Please proceed a few posts further into the thread for information actually regarding the story.

07-Jul-2007 23:08:47 - Last edited on 02-Nov-2010 01:29:15 by Narcisi

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- Hit 1,000 posts on the First of April, much thanks to Smurfie Blurfie! -
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Please, PLEASE:
FEED the story CHOCOLATE!

^Announcement^ ~~ Unfortunately, due to the overwhelming amount of chocolate being in some cases forcefully shoved down my story's throat (not to mention due to my waning supply of creativity), I have been forced to no longer award unique "feeder ranks" to each person. But you still get your name up on the first page!
So feed away, my minions!
Number of CHOCOLATE Feeders: TWENTY-NINE!!!! <3
FEEDERS: Fred Zeppeli (Manipulating-to-get-up-on-the-first-page Feeder), Patriot5 (Super Feeder), Dle Uloser (Evil Feeder), Zappo 6 (Wench), Sigurdur130 (AoL Feeder!), Scout574 (Extravagant Feeder), Bob er2 2 (Off-Topic Feeder), Smurf Black (Die-hard Feeder), Peetellica, Gmm579, Ehrlic, Gpm7, Matt90108, Pichu991, Charmeddude0, Joppi J, Isocheim, Carter9992, Shadow43222, Aviary 147, Redheadtimbo, Face Ray 3, Geo The Arch, Catwoman589, Dudelydude7, Axle Leroy, Zammy Blitza, Anapanascram, Forest Fore
These feeders are under the protection of the Chocolate for the Story Proclamation. [Page 163, Sec. IV, Par. 2] Any who inflict injuries on these feeders for whatever purpose will be punished to the full extent of my pencil. Because that's as far as I can reach from where I'm sitting right now.
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07-Jul-2007 23:09:49 - Last edited on 02-Apr-2008 01:56:40 by Narcisi

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• The Introduction That Nobody Reads •

º Background Check º
Welcome, welcome, step right up, to the newest(ish) production from Game Freak Studios: A Pineapple Under the Sea! Time for a background check on this baby.
Bahah. So, as the title oh-so-subtly suggests, this story is about a pineapple under the sea. I'll give you one guess as to who's pineapple it is. If you get it wrong, I don't think you deserve to breathe.
Anyway, I started this story a few months ago, about halfway through the '07 school year. I finished it the middle-ish of May, and have been making minor corrections and revisions ever since. I've decided to open it to the public, to see what you guys think.
So read it, and tell me how much it stinks. D:

º The Lowdown º
Ok, so here's the lowdown. I have the entire story typed up already. It is safely tucked away amidst friends and family in my Microsoft Word documents. Because I like to torment my fans (Wait, scratch that. If I had fans, I would torment them. >.&gt ;) , though, I'm going to slowly feed it to you over a period of time. Specifically, I will be updating with one chapter every week. Don't worry, though. There are only 10 chapters. At the rate of a chapter a week, you'll have the entire story in a little less than a 2 and a half months. It's all good. Oh yeah, and if I get more readers I might decide to post the chapters a bit faster. ;)

07-Jul-2007 23:09:58 - Last edited on 19-Oct-2007 01:39:05 by Narcisi

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• Table of Contents That Most People Never Read And Subsequently Get Lost •

º Major Posts º

» Post One »»» Rambling «
» Post Two »»» Chocolate Feeders «
» Post Three »»» Introduction «
» Post Four »»» Table of Contents «
» Post Five »»» Friend List «
» Post Six »»» Credits / Acquaintances «
» Post Seven »»» Extra Space «
» Post Eight »»» Extra Space «
» Post Nine »»» Extra Space «
» Post Ten »»» Extra Space «


º The Chapters º

» Prologue »»» Page 2 »» Posts 3 and 5
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» Chapter One »»» Page 5 »» Posts 2 to 6
» Chapter Two »»» Page 8 »» Posts 5 to 10 ~~~ Page 9 »» Posts 1 and 2
» Chapter Three »»» Page 11 »» Posts 4 to 9
» Chapter Four »»» Page 12 »» Posts 3 to 9
» Chapter Five »»» Page 24 »» Posts 8 to 10 ~~~ Page 25 »» Posts 1 to 5
» Chapter Six »»» Page 43 »» Posts 7 to 10 ~~~ Page 44 »» Posts 1 and 2
» Chapter Seven »»» Page 50 »» Post 3
» Chapter Eight »»» Page 50 »» Posts 5 to 10 ~~~ Page 51 »» Posts 1 to 3
» Chapter Nine »»» Page 55 »» Posts 6 + 8 to 10 ~~~ Page 56 »» Post 1
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>> Epilogue »»» Page 56 »» Post 2

07-Jul-2007 23:10:24 - Last edited on 23-Oct-2007 02:37:20 by Narcisi

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• Friend List for People That Actually Have the Courage to Talk to Me •
Ok, here's the deal. You treat these people like 'awesome' itself. They are the ESSENCE of awesome, got it? You treat these people badly without reason, you're dead.
I know people in high places.
Translation? Annoy these guys and die.

× Parakarry267 [Para]
× Crystal Smee [Smeeze]
× Scout574 [Scouteh]
× Humbug
× White Wolf492 [Wolfy]
× Ippy
× Slay1820 [Xen]
× Squirel Girl [Squilly]
× Sunsetice [Slice]
× Aspectofbane
× Dragonfyre11 [Head]
× Wandererau
× Dle Uloser
× Smurf Black [Smurfie Blurfie]
× Cooljedidude
× Fred Zeppeli [Fred? Zepp? ;0]

× List is subject to change at any moment in time, including 4 minutes from now, 12 minutes from now, or never.

07-Jul-2007 23:10:33 - Last edited on 01-Dec-2007 04:13:34 by Narcisi

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• In Which I List Certain Noble Souls That Have Assisted Me in My Literary Quest •

× White Wolf492
»» A.K.A. Wolfy. He's the one who bumped me into gear. Thanks to him I gained the determination to improve my writing.
× Academy of Literature
»» Founded by Wazzup<c>iscool, this place helped my along in my first baby steps in the Story Forum. Through it I met many kind people who later turned out to be valuable friends.
× Manipulator0
»» A.K.A. Ippy. Hahah, what a guy. Founder of the deceased Writers Elite. Funny guy with a wry sense of humor, who proved a good role model to aspire to.
× The Golden Pen
»» It all comes down to The Golden Pen. If it wasn't for Smeeze and the others in it, I would never be where I am today. I want to extend a special thanks to all the members (including the current owner, Strides) for all they've done to make my entire experience with them one I could never forget.

~ Le Fin.

07-Jul-2007 23:10:50 - Last edited on 21-May-2008 20:05:25 by Narcisi

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• Quotes From Cool People Praising the Awesomeness That Is My Story •

Patriot5 said:
"I've heard good things about this story and await the continuation!"
[First poster!]

Orb Master44 said:
"After reading your first page of reserves I'm afraid they're going to be funnier than the story XD!"

Wishfish41 said:
"That was odd, yet it made me laugh, lol. I liked it, good start!"
[Writers of Runescape founder! ;O]

Shadow128931 said:
"This is a very well written story! Good job! I can't wait to read the next chapters. :) "

Zappo 6 said:
"Knaaaaaaaave :D I like it. ^_^ "
[Wench! ;D]

Joppi J said:
"Bump for joo, Game, for you, truly, are the most 1337 of them all."

Cooljedidude said:
"Wha...? What happened to your story? This has really gone through a lot of editing I see!
Well, glad to see the adventure of Zach continue, in your crazy, insane world. You've really improved from the first Zach stories you wrote."

Dudelydude7 said:
"Oh my GAWD! This is the most beutifully done weird story I have seen in my whole LIFE! You mixed freakin' firearms with SPONGE BOB, and pulled it off!! How do you do that!??! I don't know how you did that but it scares me, it's so amazing! Have some chocolate while I dial 911!
*hands a large chunk of milk chocolate*"

Archerjohn5 said:
"You are an amazing writer. Next time may I suggest finding a more serious topic? Still....WOW!!!!! ;) "

Smurf Black said:
"Indeed; this story is magnificent."

Numbuh007 said:
"sup game! i just read everything from beginning to end and i like it! awesome story keep writing!"

Axle Leroy said:
"Bookmarked. Awesome story Game."

Lordofdraken said:
"The story was great though, I think I already told you that "elsewhere". Nicely done."
[Owner of The Amethyst Library!]

121snake121 said:
"Completely halarious, absolutely original. Brilliant."
[ Professional Reviewer!]

Scout574 said:
"I absolutely loved it so much I read the whole thing."
[Owner of the Writer's Temple!]

07-Jul-2007 23:11:07 - Last edited on 19-Feb-2008 22:55:22 by Narcisi

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• Quotes From Cool People Praising the Awesomeness That Is My Story •
»» Continued

I Corryn I said:
"I enjoyed this story quite a bit Game. Its strong points were in its originality, characterization and grammar, as well as a great deal of good dialogue."
[ Professional Reviewer!]

Sigurdur130 said:
"I really like this story :) Wish you'd write more ;) "
[Owner of the Academy of Literature!(last time I checked xD)]

DLe Uloser said:
"This story is awesome. Without Gamefreak *Grabs him by neck and rubs his head extra fast* I wouldn't be writing stories today. If anyone says this story is horrible; you will be seeing me in court tomorrow, or maybe next month. Soon anyway."
[Devoted Poster xD]

Cowloverwhee said:
"Very nice! Unthinkably creative."
[Owner of The Bovine Grading System.]

Auraofguthix said:
"Very funny story, Game; just read the whole thing."
[Master of EPIC.]

Onekingd0wn said:
"HILARIOUS!!!"

Blue Orb 7 said:
"Good story... Good story..."

07-Jul-2007 23:11:40 - Last edited on 21-May-2008 20:09:37 by Narcisi

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• In Which I Advertise and Such •

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