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Medraut
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25-Nov-2010 03:52:50

Charmeddude0

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CHAPTER 9:

For a month afterward, Valkyrie followed Jack, taking note of every single, mundane detail of Jack’s life. He watched as Jack searched Crater City for clues as to the whereabouts of Jennifer Stone’s killer. As Jack stood for hours outside of the bar Valkyrie burned down, lifelessly staring at its burnt remains. He seemed to be driven by something and nothing at all. He appeared to come from out of nowhere, and be completely useless. Valkyrie assumed the Royal One hired him to play police officer.

It’d been close to two months since Jack arrived in Crater City, and Valkyrie felt it was time for his journey to end.

One day, Valkyrie followed Jack to the inn in which he stayed. Jack was tired from a long, tiring day of drinking and wandering through time exclaiming, “Angels don’t kill people, dammit!” Valkyrie enjoyed his drunken state, he would put up less of a fight.

He perched himself on the roof of a nearby building, watching as Jack fumbled into the inn. After some time, Valkyrie stood up and dove to the ground below under the sea of stars over head. He landed firmly on his feet. Calmly, he entered the inn. The receptionist was a perky blond by the name of Jessica. She greeted Valkyrie seductively, but all he heard was “Kill me.” Valkyrie thought to fulfill this wish at a later time. Now he wanted to devote his time to Jack.

He approached the reception desk coolly and rested his elbows on its cold, wooden exterior. He leaned in and whispered, “Can you tell me where that strapping, bounty hunter Jack lives?

Jessica giggled girlishly, “You’re here for him? I had no idea he was into…” She stopped herself in mid-thought before she said anything offensive. “…four floors up, third door to the right.” Valkyrie nodded and started up the stairs, listening to her persistent giggles. He reached into his black long coat and pulled out a small, sharp throwing knife.

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He turned swiftly and tossed it, puncturing her jugular perfectly. She couldn’t even scream. He continued up the stairs, ignoring the fact that this was a reckless kill and that anybody could trace him off that throwing knife. He blamed this current state of apathy on his invincible state and continued up the stairs. Following Jessica’s directions, he found himself at Jack’s door in no time.

There was a small peephole in the door. Valkyrie peaked in, to find Jack passed out on his bed with the lights on. *Drunk ****…” he muttered as he turned the door **** and silently cracked open the door. He slid in through the space and closed it with the same stealth. He flipped the light switch, drenching the room in complete darkness.

Like a cat, Valkyrie crept towards the foot of Jack’s bed. He pulled out a dagger from his coat and tested its sharpness on his thumb. He grinned as a scarlet drop appeared upon the blade. “Perfect…” he muttered. “Time to feed the monster…”

Valkyrie made his way over to the side of Jack’s bed and raised his dagger over Jack’s throat and brought it down hard, slicing his vocal cords. Jack jerked away, shooting blood from his mouth. He tried to scream but failed. “Don’t even bother, Jack…” Valkyrie spat, tearing the blade out of Jack’s throat. Jack’s eyes grew wide in pain until became unbearable.

“You never had a chance… maybe this way you won’t be so useless,” Valkyrie scoffed. He grasped the corpse and slung it over his back, blood gushing all over him. He kicked open a window and leapt out into the night.

When, suddenly, an image of the Spirit appeared in mid-flight. Valkyrie struggled to remain balanced while keeping the corpse over his shoulder. He landed on his feet, almost stumbling over but ultimately catching himself. He searched up and down the street, looking for a sign of the woman in black, but there was none. In the dead of the night, the street was completely lifeless.

27-Nov-2010 22:06:59

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Valkyrie returned his gaze to his objective, the Chapel of the Crater at the end of the street. It seemed to glow with a certain holy light, beckoning Valkyrie to it. Without hesitating a second more, Valkyrie ventured forth. In no time the image appeared before him once again, this time she spoke.

“Stop, Valkyrie. You don’t know what you’re doing,” the Spirit called, almost pleading.

Valkyrie shrugged her off, trudging through the apparition. “Whatever I’m about to do is just as much your fault as it is mine. You did this to me,” he snapped.

The Spirit followed him, “If even the slightest drop of his blood touches the altar in there… you will never be able to reverse the effects… do you understand? This is deeper than anything you’ve ever done.”

Valkyrie stopped and turned to the Spirit, a wide, maniacal grin on his face. “Then, maybe I’m tired of simple murders and city wide corruption. Ever since Jennifer Stone, this city has been taking baby steps to hell… maybe it’s time someone gave it a push?*

The spirit was speechless, responding with a simple look of fear. “They’ll be after you…”

“What does it matter?” Valkyrie snapped back quickly. “I can’t die.” Valkyrie turned around and continued towards the Chapel while the Spirit cried in protest. He ignored her with ease. By time he made it into the chapel, her screams seemed to fade into the night.

A low rumbling came from deep, down under the church. A demonic aura came from the altar at the front of the church. It called out to Valkyrie. There was nothing slowing him down. He almost ran towards the altar, dropping the corpse on it eagerly.

Jack’s blood spilled all over the altar, drenching it in crimson. Nothing happened, but Valkyrie waited eagerly, expecting fire, brimstone, and other things that accompany the apocalypse. But there was none. So, disappointed, Valkyrie left the Chapel just before Jack’s body disintegrated into the altar.

A low demonic chuckle emanated from the altar.

TBC

27-Nov-2010 22:08:12

Charmeddude0

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Hey so I'm not dead and I've been looking through this (the story, not the comments) and I don't like how it turned out. So I'm gonna reboot it.

I have a whole new story panned out that's gonna use the same beginning, with some slight tweaks to keep things fresh :P . I've been reading a lot of comics, and I realize this reimagining may be a little comic booky, but I think the storyline is better.

It'll require a new thread because I want it to be FRESH and NEW and stuff of that nature. So I'm just posting this to let everyone know, and stuff. So yeah.

The new one, so far, will still be called They Call Me Valkyrie... until I can think of a different name :P . Anyway, thank you to whomever read, and I hope you read the remake.

22-Jun-2011 03:10:15

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