I really like these stories, the endings are all deliciously twisted. I really did like the one about the Other Storyteller, quite good. The rest of them were nice and devious, you've clearly got some style Kyle. Keep up the good work.
I did not see that there were more stories on other pages, so I'm editing this to say what I think. I gotta say, they just get better and better. I know it's been said before but you really have a knack for endings. I especially like Ghost In To the Net. Help from me ftw.
Ok, I finally finished all of them. Quite gruesome near the end there I must say. Well, you have officially convinced me that you are completely insane.
I really liked the one about the alley, I can't quite remember the old guy's name. I'm just wondering...did he *really* have dead bodies in the house?
Some great horror stories in here Kyle, I'll come back and read whenever you want, although I don't think I can stomach any rereads.
Elly
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Thanks ELly, and I hope you enjoy your trip to Israel (I haven't forgotten
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Yes I think I am partly unstable in the head but that's what I love about myself. My brain is on a totally different frequency than everyone at my school no doubt. I am glad I am using it to my advantage.
Hopefully I will keep up with writing my shorts though I have started a long story (It's called The Dwellers, I have decided to tell you all the name, though it won't be on the forums for awhile)
Thanks again for your comments. They really help!
P.S. Yes Flynn really did keep dead bodies in his house. But in his words he would say something along the lines of, "Majority wins every time. Why do people think murderers are horrible people? Because the majority thinks that way. If the tables were turned and half the world was killers I think are form of morals would be different."
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