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Dark Enmity

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Thank you Tava once again. I have been quite lax lately in my proof-reading but you have shown me that that is not good. :) I will correct it right away. And thanks for the ending appreciation—this was one of my favorite endings. :D

03-Jun-2009 22:19:23 - Last edited on 03-Jun-2009 22:20:34 by Dark Enmity

Tava60

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Well im just helpin you out there Kyle (if you dont mind me calling you that) well anyways just read "Winters Weather" you had an object appear at the end called as you put it "red canister of candies" which im guessing is a flare of some sort.

Well my friend was IMing me and I might of missed it but i dont remember reading where it was stated before. Other than that great story. Actually it kinda reminded me of one of those survial stories.

Still nice one their.

04-Jun-2009 01:12:33

Dark Enmity

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I actually prefer it when people call my Kyle. Also I first mentioned the "red candy" In the fourth post, first paragraph of the story, right when Katelyn was collecting a bunch of items to bring.

04-Jun-2009 01:16:51 - Last edited on 04-Jun-2009 01:17:55 by Dark Enmity

Tava60

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Oh, good knew you were better than that and I just missed something.

Well anyways I just read "The Bomb" and I just have to say bravo. It was shorter but never the less I just loved how you put Emily like a bomb and jsut kept making references about them the whole time.

Another one you suggest or I'll just go in order?

04-Jun-2009 02:01:41

Dark Enmity

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Hi Paccy, can't wait to hear what you think. :)

Tava; it doesn't really matter, thought if you like getting creeped out read Claude's Children, or The Neighbours. If you just want a sad story read Sanji's Tale, The Poisoned Goblet or The Other Storyteller.

Edit: I am working on another story which should take a few days to complete. I won't give it away too much but it's about a police car, an accident, and the most unfortunate of victims...mwhahahaha!

04-Jun-2009 03:19:42 - Last edited on 04-Jun-2009 03:24:53 by Dark Enmity

Tava60

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Well you were definattly right about "Sangi's tale". The ending was just.. just... Just sadfull.

Also I know Kyle if doesnt matter, but i like to read the best first. Not that it matters much, its just im trying to cut down my internet time a bit and want the best first.

And cant wait for the next story, MWWWWWHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHA!!!!

04-Jun-2009 20:45:04

Dark Enmity

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Well Tava that is slightly difficult seeing as I think practically every story on this thread are all at about the same level.

Though I guess that my bests are near the end of the thread. The ones at the beginning I wrote when I first joined the forums, so if I have improved you will see it near the end.

Based on that that means that Party! should be my best. But seeing as you have read that and Winter Weather, I suggest you go backwards and read Claude's Children.

Good luck. :)

04-Jun-2009 22:20:58

Tava60

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Well Claude has a bit of mental issues I think, what he did to the girl was horrid. He was devoted though to do what he did.

You seriously have a thing with endings though, I just love how you have us readers imagine what happens after the "curtains close" so to speak.

Also hope i'm not annoying or anything with me posting so much.

04-Jun-2009 22:51:44 - Last edited on 04-Jun-2009 22:53:47 by Tava60

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