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Binary Clone

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Well, I'm glad you appreciate my feedback.
Also, I think the only problem I have with any of the stories is Ghost In To the Net, I think it's called... I don't think it's possible to run out of air in a cop car like that, otherwise wouldn't everyone asphyxiate and die on road trips? No car is airtight- that'd be stupid. Unless, of course, all of it is just her imagination and her paranoia is making her think that she's running out of oxygen.

16-Jun-2009 15:20:59 - Last edited on 16-Jun-2009 15:21:31 by Binary Clone

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Glad for you to come back King.
You are right, cars are not airtight. I am not an expert, but since car trunks—which was where I mentioned the lack of oxygen—are not supposed to accommodate humans I am guessing they wouldn't be as welcoming with air. That being said, I myself have faith that they aren't airtight, but would cause difficulty in breathing. Add in Beth's paranoia and faster breathing and you have a recipe for an unconscious teen.
P.S. You are right. Cars aren't airtight. :)

16-Jun-2009 22:25:36

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Ah, I see. Okay, thanks for explaining all of that. And, in my opinion, these stories are certainly worth coming back to. Unfortunately, it doesn't seem like this kind of work is nearly as appreciated as it should be on this forum.
Thank you for sharing your work with the rest of us, I'll keep checking in to look for new stories. And if I find anything else to point out, you can be sure I will. :)

16-Jun-2009 23:22:45

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