Well, I'm glad you appreciate my feedback.
Also, I think the only problem I have with any of the stories is Ghost In To the Net, I think it's called... I don't think it's possible to run out of air in a cop car like that, otherwise wouldn't everyone asphyxiate and die on road trips? No car is airtight- that'd be stupid. Unless, of course, all of it is just her imagination and her paranoia is making her think that she's running out of oxygen.
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