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Carsten 901

Carsten 901

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I probly will (I have a plan for em and i have a fealling that i will be able to getyour bio in also if i take it over then i have a plan for why the students are in chains. (I hope i dont have to)) And feal free to make sajestions

02-May-2011 02:29:19

Beep282

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Ahhhhhh sorry guys I slipped and fell off the face of the earth for a time. lol it's been a busy month, I went to Hawaii for a week or so and had star testing, essays, science tests, track practices and meets. The works.... I feel really bad about letting the story die. So I will rejuvenate it...

Carsten: thank you for taking up the responsibility of continuing the story in my abscense. I shouldn't have been so lazy as to stop writing for so long. Ps Ill duel you soon ;)

Rose(lol still gonna call ya that) gl on your questing! Sorry for being Missing in action for so long. I like your idea about a new species and may implement it in. Would it be ok if they are evil? the empire needs some more beastly people in their ranks lol ( don't worry your bio will swap sides... unless you don't want her too...)

Once again sorry and thank you. I'll do my best to pick up where I left off! I'll try to make up for what I've failed to do.

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makin a new chapter =) !!! :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D




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07-May-2011 18:52:48

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CHAPTER 11: The Prisoners

Tirent's head felt as though someone had gone at it with a hammer, and his body felt like he hadn't moved it in years. He opened his eyes and scanned the room around him. It looked like he was in one of the cells he had seen. the walls were all grey and there was a barred door in the front of the room. The bed that Tirent was laying on was bolted to the ground in the corner. The cot felt awful, a thin layer of cotton between him and the springs that dug into his sides. Then Tirent saw something he didn't expect, there was a door in the back of the cell as well. It was ajar and looked like it led into more cells.
Tirent decided he should investigate, so he gave himself a quick examination, he was bruised up pretty bad, a possible broken rib let itself be known when he tried to sit up. The only pain that he couldn't explain was the excruciating pain that emanated from his forehead. Tirent shook his head trying to push the pain out of his thoughts. He had to concentrate.
Tirent sat forward slowly wincing as he did so. Then he noticed the handcuffs he had on. They were definitely strange, they had blue symbols on them which glowed on and off and they didn't actually have a chain on them. The pieces of metal resembled thick bracelets more than handcuffs. Tirent stood up, and suddenly realized just how weak he was, his legs shook and could barely hold his weight. What was wrong with him? He had been beat up worse than this and had never felt this way.
Tirent stumbled through the door and walked into another cell, but this had two more doors, a mirror, a wood table and some chairs in it. What kind of place was this?
Tirent looked into the mirror. He looked tired, his hair was a darker shade of blonde than he had ever seen, and there were dark circles under his eyes. But what struck Tirent the most were his eyes themselves. They were almost white. There were only a few wisps of the red that once inhabited his irises.

07-May-2011 19:23:53

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Tirent stared in shock at his reflection, what was happening to him? Then someone walked in. He looked about Tirent's age. He had short brown hair, and dark eyes and Tirent was just a bit taller than him.
"Ah your awake, how do you feel?" The man asked.
Tirent opened his mouth to answer, but realized he wasn't speaking. He coughed hard and tried to clear his throat. Finally, he managed to rasp, " I've felt better..."
The man laughed, and said " I'm Tork"
"I'm Tirent" Tirent mumbled, " What exactly is this place?"
Tork shook his head, "We'll get to that, first you should meet everyone here."
Tirent was too tired and weak to object, so he followed Tork into one of the doors where five people sat around a table with a bowl of soup in front of each of them, there were two empty seats, both with a bowl of soup in front of it.
Tork sat Tirent down in one of them and then sat down across the table.
Tirent looked around as five faces stared at him.
Tork spoke up, " This is Tirent."
"Tirent these are the rest of the people who live in this cell block, not including our block leader whose in there." Tork said gesturing to a closed door.
One man had long black hair that hung over his face like curtains, Tork narrated for Tirent passed his eyes over each person. The man with the black hair's name was Swaz, next Tirent looked and saw a young girl, probably thirteen or fourteen, who had brown hair, and an innocent face. Her name was Kate. Then Tirent looked to a man with long blonde hair similar to Nate's. His name was Cory. Then Tirent saw a woman, She had long flowing black hair and piercing eyes, her name was Marie. Finally, the last person was Dex, whose jet black hair was swept back and muscles rip down his arms and torso.
Marie seemed immediately interested in Tirent. "You should eat your soup. Its good for you" she suggested. Tirent looked down and the brown liquid, and realized that he was starving.

continued...

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Tirent started to eat/drink his soup vigorously. When he noticed that Kate, the small girl had been staring intently at him, much more than the others. He looked up at her, soup dripping from his mouth.
She c0cked her head to the side and asked, " Whats wrong with your eyes?"
Several of the others shook their heads and covered their eyes with their hands, embarrassed that their youngest member would so bluntly insult the stranger's look.
Tirent answered, " I wish I knew..."
But the girl's comment about his eyes reminded him of how clueless he was about what was going on. He stopped eating and looked up at all of the people at the table and said as strongly as he could, " Can somebody please tell me what the hell is going on here?"
Swaz turned to Tork and whispered something. Tork stood up slowly, " Tirent, you need to see our block leader." Cory, Dex, and Marie nodded in agreement.
They took him through the closed door and into another room and sat him down in a chair.
There was only one chair, everybody else stood behind Tirent, and there was a person who stood with his back turned to Tirent.
"Who is this?" the man asked.
"The new cell block member sir." Tork replied.
The man turned around, and Tirent was shocked to see someone he never expected to see again.
In front of him stood Dimboo.
A sudden rush of energy rushed into Tirent,
"YOU!" he screamed, leaping from his seat at Dimboo.
Many things all happened at once. Dimboo took a few steps back, Dex and Cory both grabbed Tirent pulling him back and the strange handcuffs, glowed even more brightly, Tirent suddenly dropped to his knees now exhausted.
"What... the ... hell....is... going ..on" Tirent said as he gasped for breath.
"Tirent!" Dimboo exclaimed, "I never thought I'd see you again!"

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Dex and Cory had tied Tirent to his chair and Dimboo was explaining the happenings since Tirent's escape. Apparently Morgan and taken control of the facility and made it double as a testing ground for new ways of training. Morgan forced the children into the lower level to live there. He kept a few groups of kids outside to keep appearances up. But the real training happened downstairs where heightened increases in skills could be achieved. Morgan was assembling teams, put together by cell block. Dimboo also explained that the handcuffs kept Tirent's energy at a low at all times. That was why he lost all of his energy so fast. Tirent took in the information grudgingly. He hated the man who stood before him with a passion, but he was saying mattered, and if Tirent wanted to escape he needed to know what was being told to him.
After a while they sent Tirent back to his 'bedroom' where he lay pondering what he had learned, and dealing with a monster of a headache.
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~A day earlier~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Zephy was getting worried, Everyone had returned from their missions, without a hitch, expect for Tirent's team. Where were they? The hot sun blazed over head as it neared three o'clock.
Zephy suddenly sat up in the chair he had been resting in for the past two hours and pushed his black hair out of his eyes.
"Sorak! Look Dragons!" he yelled.
Sorak jumped up and scanned the sky, immediately catching sight of three dragons diving toward the gorge.
"Finally." Sorak said.
The rest of the team walked outside of the cave and watched as the three dragons descended. Zephy recognized the familiar reddish dragon that Tirent turned into, but then suddenly it faded away, the other tow transformed and smoothly, Colliea and Balak landed on the ground. Both seemed rushed.
Colliea was first to speak, " There is something wrong at the facility. Tirent is still there, he said if he doesn't come back by nightfall... to attack."

07-May-2011 20:25:45 - Last edited on 08-May-2011 04:57:28 by Beep282

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UMMMM thats it for this chapter. Not too much action but its setting the story up for action lol. it doesn't totally explained the students in chains but you'll understand more soon. Its kinda confusing, but uhhh,(don't wanna give too much away)just... remember that Tirent was unconscious and still isn't to sure about what or where he is. I have a plan laid out for the next few chapters so they should be coming this weekend. hopefully carsten can tell me his idea for a chapter so i may be able to integrate it.

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07-May-2011 20:28:23 - Last edited on 08-May-2011 05:00:44 by Beep282

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