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Silver Snake

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At least I tried.
~I do have a signature, I just can’t be stuffed using it.

07-Jul-2008 08:28:50

Chuk

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Yeah. Good effort. I applaud you, and would probably go post, 'cept that I know it's useless. They take it the wrong way, don't really care that much, etc, etc. Meh. I shouldn't talk about people that way, no matter how much they frustrate me. Anyway, I need sleep, so I'm off now.
Maybe one person will start reading more; we can always hope, right?

07-Jul-2008 08:31:21

Silver Snake

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I think Iso's trying to read during these holidays, and Mitch didn't immediately banish the concept, so I might convince a person or two.
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07-Jul-2008 08:33:45

[#E4B29LWTR]

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Ok, I've read the prologue and it is very impressive. It was intense.
However, at times I found you did not have your grammar right. Or your words spelled properly. I caught a spelling mistake on the last post of the Prologue.
Where the dialogue starts, if I were you I would check back, as I counted some grammical mistakes.
My whole review will be up when I finish your story. Keep up the Snakilicious work.

07-Jul-2008 18:27:44 - Last edited on 07-Jul-2008 18:28:50 by [#E4B29LWTR]