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"You’re grammar was great, it was easy to read the story without a thought to what a sentence meant. If you had written ‘fifty three’ rather than ‘three and fifty,’ this story’s grammar would be close to perfect."
First: You're should be your.
Second: saying 'three and fifty' when meaning 'fifty three' is grammatically correct. It's just old language. Fits perfectly in this story. I know it's your review and st00f, but I wanted to voice my disagreement :)
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11-Dec-2007 17:18:51

Raichu9

Raichu9

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It's my first review, stop criticizing. I'm going to live in a hole for three days, and when I come back, you'd better have stopped criticizing.
Or else!!!
*Cracks knuckles*

11-Dec-2007 17:20:48 - Last edited on 11-Dec-2007 17:30:31 by Raichu9

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Well, Ra, I've lived whole all my life :) I don't think three days should be so tough :P
However, if, for some reason, you meant to say you'd live in a hole, that'd be a different story altogether ;)
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11-Dec-2007 17:26:55

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