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Ardhonmeth
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Since I don't exactly have a rubric to use, and am not patient enough to make one, I'll just tell you the faults and such.
I think that it was a fairly clichè storyline, though your grammar and skill at storytelling fairly evened it out. I saw one typo, which I'll leave you to find in your proofreading, and, though the fact that from the beginning (besides the hints)I predicted that one god/demi-god would use his/her life energy to keep one god alive and fail, I think that you made the tale of the Armageddon of Gielinor flow very well.
Bronze.
Kidding. >_>
Gold Pen, for your craftsmanship as a storysmith.
/~\ I'll fight you until Hell freezes over, then I'll fight you in the ice. /~\
I think that it was a fairly clichè storyline, though your grammar and skill at storytelling fairly evened it out. I saw one typo, which I'll leave you to find in your proofreading, and, though the fact that from the beginning (besides the hints)I predicted that one god/demi-god would use his/her life energy to keep one god alive and fail, I think that you made the tale of the Armageddon of Gielinor flow very well.
Bronze.
Kidding. >_>
Gold Pen, for your craftsmanship as a storysmith.
/~\ I'll fight you until Hell freezes over, then I'll fight you in the ice. /~\
19-Dec-2007 23:06:54 - Last edited on 19-Dec-2007 23:07:02 by Raschilat
Cliché? I'll show you cliché
Kidding =P
Alright, gold is good. Thanks Scout =D
Kidding =P
Alright, gold is good. Thanks Scout =D
20-Dec-2007 07:15:22 - Last edited on 20-Dec-2007 07:15:34 by Poller5
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