Shell's Offcial Late review for no apparent guild for poller a few months after Poller asked for it!
Since have no real format, i'll just make it up as I go!
Ye Olde-ness: I think that you really did a good job making the way the story is told as un-contemporary as possible. It made you feel like you were in some ancient library, reading a scroll lost for years, and just now dscoverng iit's secrets. Good job on that!
Actionyness: I think that even though the epicness of the story made many people overlook ths fact, the fnal battle between Guthx and Zaros was underdescribed. You told us what was happenn*, but you could've descrbed what the spells actually looked lke, or what t felt to be n the wake of ther shockwaves. Just because it's a god battle and everything s really powerful doesn't mean that you can't descrbe the fght scene lke you would a normal story.
Epicness- Many people try to make god war stories because they thnk the fact that t's a god war wll make t nstantly epc, and powerful. That's obvously not true though, as I have read my far share of God war flops. Ths, thankfully,ths s not one of those stories. You were able, by the mix of tradegy, action, and gods in trouble, you were able to make t just unbeleveable enough for t to be great.
Likeability- I liked it, so you're good in ths catagory.
Total! Awesome out of cool
Ya did good, poller!
19-Apr-2008 15:06:07
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