That was a great story. The flow flowed together very well and your use of language was captivating. It really added a unique touch to the story and made it stand out.
"Three and ten of them there were..."
Just sounds so cool
25-Nov-2007 20:07:18
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Elitemage14
dnag purty good i like it but the story of castle wars is more captivating to me but....tht doesent mean much as it is well REALY good mark my words you will be listed among smee as the greatest rs authors of all time.( and dont recall his name right now but whoever wrote the quest for the bronze dagger)
;)