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crystal magic and melee weapons PLEASE ADD THIS
Both of those are ideas I thought of earlier. Unfortunately, both have problems unfortunately.
The crystal magicks: if you mean a new spell book, my problem with this is that the script does not involve much magic. For example, desert treasure was about searching for the magical diamonds of Azzandra, so it made sense that the spell book would derive from the elements of the diamonds. Lunar diplomacy involved the highly magical clan of the moon clan, and joining their ranks. Mourning end part III here doesn't relate to anything like that: this one is more about tactics, war, and thinking. Won't lie though, a "light spell" would be pretty shweeticle.
And the melee crystal weapon: Jagex apparently wants to create an Elf lands achievement diary, and since the only item slots left are the pocket and mainhand: it looks like the reward will be the coveted crystal halberd (also confirmed to be added soon). I’m not great at this game, but I do love quests.
crystal magic and melee weapons PLEASE ADD THIS
Both of those are ideas I thought of earlier. Unfortunately, both have problems unfortunately.
The crystal magicks: if you mean a new spell book, my problem with this is that the script does not involve much magic. For example, desert treasure was about searching for the magical diamonds of Azzandra, so it made sense that the spell book would derive from the elements of the diamonds. Lunar diplomacy involved the highly magical clan of the moon clan, and joining their ranks. Mourning end part III here doesn't relate to anything like that: this one is more about tactics, war, and thinking. Won't lie though, a "light spell" would be pretty shweeticle.
And the melee crystal weapon: Jagex apparently wants to create an Elf lands achievement diary, and since the only item slots left are the pocket and mainhand: it looks like the reward will be the coveted crystal halberd (also confirmed to be added soon). I’m not great at this game, but I do love quests.
27-Sep-2013 03:04:50
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crystal magic and melee weapons PLEASE ADD THIS
Both of those are ideas I thought of earlier. Unfortunately, both have problems unfortunately.
The crystal magicks: if you mean a new spell book, my problem with this is that the script does not involve much magic. For example, desert treasure was about searching for the magical diamonds of Azzandra, so it made sense that the spell book would derive from the elements of the diamonds. Lunar diplomacy involved the highly magical clan of the moon clan, and joining their ranks. Mourning end part III here doesn't relate to anything like that: this one is more about tactics, war, and thinking. Won't lie though, a "light spell" would be pretty shweeticle.
And the melee crystal weapon: Jagex apparently wants to create an Elf lands achievement diary, and since the only item slots left are the pocket and mainhand: it looks like the reward will be the coveted crystal halberd (also confirmed to be added soon).
I meant a staff, not magic.
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crystal magic and melee weapons PLEASE ADD THIS
Both of those are ideas I thought of earlier. Unfortunately, both have problems unfortunately.
The crystal magicks: if you mean a new spell book, my problem with this is that the script does not involve much magic. For example, desert treasure was about searching for the magical diamonds of Azzandra, so it made sense that the spell book would derive from the elements of the diamonds. Lunar diplomacy involved the highly magical clan of the moon clan, and joining their ranks. Mourning end part III here doesn't relate to anything like that: this one is more about tactics, war, and thinking. Won't lie though, a "light spell" would be pretty shweeticle.
And the melee crystal weapon: Jagex apparently wants to create an Elf lands achievement diary, and since the only item slots left are the pocket and mainhand: it looks like the reward will be the coveted crystal halberd (also confirmed to be added soon).
I meant a staff, not magic.
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02-Oct-2013 23:55:16
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I'll read it after runespan :3, I got one thing to say though, you've put a great deal of work into this and I salute you on this...but there's something that you should of done, first of all, you need to create paragraphs, instead of putting it all in one go, let your text breath a bit. It's also easier to read and stop at some place to continue later.
Ah and a Table of Content would be a pretty sweet addition to this, you should also add to this a post where you say posts that had interesting feedback, for exemple the crystal halberd idea(if I'm not mistaken).
Otherwise, great job man, I'll read it when I'll have the time, probably mention it on my own quest thread (as another Elf quest would help for the Quest I wrote).
First: Completely unrelated, but very very nice title.
Anyways, about the quest: Thank you! I'm glad you like how it looks from here. And the paragraphs was any idea I actually DID use. You see, before I put all this on the forums, I spent day and night typing this up on Microsoft word, then I copy+pasted. Unfortunately, due to the 2000 character limit per post, I had to limit myself a bit, so I got rid of the paragraphs. With all due respect, I really don't want to make this longer than I need to. And about a table of contents: Well, I guess I already explained this: I don't want to make it too incredibly long. Plus, I advertise this script as "with a lot of twists!" Adding a table of contents may spoil it a bit.
But the interesting post idea may be a pretty good idea. I suppose I can pick out a few noteworthy posts.
I look forward to you reading the quest!
I’m not great at this game, but I do love quests.
I'll read it after runespan :3, I got one thing to say though, you've put a great deal of work into this and I salute you on this...but there's something that you should of done, first of all, you need to create paragraphs, instead of putting it all in one go, let your text breath a bit. It's also easier to read and stop at some place to continue later.
Ah and a Table of Content would be a pretty sweet addition to this, you should also add to this a post where you say posts that had interesting feedback, for exemple the crystal halberd idea(if I'm not mistaken).
Otherwise, great job man, I'll read it when I'll have the time, probably mention it on my own quest thread (as another Elf quest would help for the Quest I wrote).
First: Completely unrelated, but very very nice title.
Anyways, about the quest: Thank you! I'm glad you like how it looks from here. And the paragraphs was any idea I actually DID use. You see, before I put all this on the forums, I spent day and night typing this up on Microsoft word, then I copy+pasted. Unfortunately, due to the 2000 character limit per post, I had to limit myself a bit, so I got rid of the paragraphs. With all due respect, I really don't want to make this longer than I need to. And about a table of contents: Well, I guess I already explained this: I don't want to make it too incredibly long. Plus, I advertise this script as "with a lot of twists!" Adding a table of contents may spoil it a bit.
But the interesting post idea may be a pretty good idea. I suppose I can pick out a few noteworthy posts.
I look forward to you reading the quest!
I’m not great at this game, but I do love quests.
04-Oct-2013 21:59:46
Thanks
, and yeah, I saw the 2000 character limits, but to be honest, lots of posts doesn't necessarly means I wouldn't read it(please don't be offended on what I'll say next, you did a great job don't worry, just watching it from someone else' point of view). Honestly, first reaction I think most people will have when they'll be reading is :
1) Nice read, but it's you know, kinda looking like a cluster****.
2) Nice read, pass over what it looks at first and ignores it.
It's a kind of flaw, I'll give you an exemple. An exemple from someone actually speaking my first language, he did a book, the book contained one sentence, that's right, one sentence...that lasted I think it was 200 and something pages. Either the reader will read it all in one shot, or cut pieces, right? well in this case it's either you read it all in one shot, or you may forget parts and it becomes a confusion more than anything.
Your work is a big one, wether you take off enters of texts or not, it will still be pretty big, but if it's cut in pieces, it's actually easier to understand(not that your text is hard to understand, I've yet to read it). It's based on my past experiences.
I get your point on the Table of Content though, You could just break it into nameless parts, that could work.
Sorry if I sound kinda maniac of the way you write, I'm not, but heh, kinda breaks it as I read in parts and think about each parts separately, not everyone does that however, but it's also mainly the fact I gotta stop reading between each games, lol.
, and yeah, I saw the 2000 character limits, but to be honest, lots of posts doesn't necessarly means I wouldn't read it(please don't be offended on what I'll say next, you did a great job don't worry, just watching it from someone else' point of view). Honestly, first reaction I think most people will have when they'll be reading is :
1) Nice read, but it's you know, kinda looking like a cluster****.
2) Nice read, pass over what it looks at first and ignores it.
It's a kind of flaw, I'll give you an exemple. An exemple from someone actually speaking my first language, he did a book, the book contained one sentence, that's right, one sentence...that lasted I think it was 200 and something pages. Either the reader will read it all in one shot, or cut pieces, right? well in this case it's either you read it all in one shot, or you may forget parts and it becomes a confusion more than anything.
Your work is a big one, wether you take off enters of texts or not, it will still be pretty big, but if it's cut in pieces, it's actually easier to understand(not that your text is hard to understand, I've yet to read it). It's based on my past experiences.
I get your point on the Table of Content though, You could just break it into nameless parts, that could work.
Sorry if I sound kinda maniac of the way you write, I'm not, but heh, kinda breaks it as I read in parts and think about each parts separately, not everyone does that however, but it's also mainly the fact I gotta stop reading between each games, lol.
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