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A few more little mistakes. Sorry if I have to keep posting, but I'm finding 'em little by little.

______Chapter 6, Post 3______

"Down from above game a giant hand,"

It's "came", right?
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------Chapter 6, Post 4------

"noting the sizable difference of the light hat<--- came"

It's "that", isn't it?
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Also, "smoldering" can be spelled like "smouldering" too, right? Kind've like "meter" and "metre", "favorite" and "favourite".

06-Jan-2009 01:51:48 - Last edited on 06-Jan-2009 01:59:28 by [#U82ZJ81IX]

06-Jan-2009 01:58:27

Wow, a lot of posts in the few hours I've been gone Join The Questing Clan of RuneScape! !

06-Jan-2009 01:59:53

06-Jan-2009 02:00:18

06-Jan-2009 02:00:39

Thank ye, N.

-- Chek

06-Jan-2009 02:09:04

See you morrow. I love this story. You don't know how this has changed me in the past hour.

~Bella, Queen of Analogies, Queen of Nightshade

06-Jan-2009 02:14:58

Shouldn't you just stick to being one monarch at a time?

06-Jan-2009 02:18:50

Yay.

Gonna post Chapter Ten now. I wanted to wait, but won't get home until after the forum time changes from the 6th to the 7th and would like to keep my daily adds up.

-- Chek

06-Jan-2009 05:48:31

06-Jan-2009 05:48:44