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AE Lambi

AE Lambi

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name: Mark Hamming
age: 12
gender: male
species: human
description: Mark has messy black hair and he has a fair skin tone. He was dark brown eyes, he is a little thin and a bit short. He usually wears a short sleeved red shirt with beige shorts.
weapons: a slingshot he keeps in his pocket.
inventory: a rope, a bottle of water, some coins...(more useful things) that he keeps in a backpack he carries.
extra: he's really curious and adventurous and brave, he always likes to help and get involved, he's like the kid you always wanted as a brother. He loves animals so much and always likes to help. He's also VERY cute and lovable.
Very nice story but when you meant find the book or whatnot do you mean like "I need to find it to stop them" thing?

19-Jan-2011 17:07:35 - Last edited on 19-Jan-2011 17:09:12 by AE Lambi

Beep282

Beep282

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Awesome story. Very gripping and really holds ones attention. I can't wait to hear more. Lol you can add me as a fan too. And here is a bio.

Name: trimen.
Age: 22
Gender: male
Species: human
Description:if you want him to be a magician or an Archer you can choose I will post a description for both. Archer: long brown hair, observant hazel eyes that seem to dart around alot. He wears Leather and has a bow and set of arrows slung across his back. He has a perfect aim andspecializes in long range assassination as well as recon and stealth.very light on his feet; coordinated.
Magician: green dreds, mostly hidden by a hood and cloak he always wears. Red eyes that seem to burn into your soul and read and examine you. He wears red robes under his cloak and has a wooden staff. Specializes in the magical arts of fire and rocks(like runescape earth spells) but is able to cast many all around useful spells such as teleporting, one time use enchantments etc...
Weapons: archer: bow and arrows. Magician: his staff.... And a dagger he keeps with him at all times.
Extra: archer: a grappling hook. Magician: a spellbook
Feel free to adjust him. !! ;) oh and check out my story. the battle for quiellea" but only if you want to! ^_^

22-Jan-2011 08:37:56 - Last edited on 22-Jan-2011 08:44:11 by Beep282

Fireheart449

Fireheart449

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I love raising-a-dragon stories ^_^ Even though the chapters are rather short, the story's still good.
Consider me a fan as well.
Edit: For future chapters (and maybe, if you have the time, for the chapters you already have posted), consider spacing out the dialogue and descriptions. For readers, it's difficult to read giant blocks of text.
For example:
[The half elf replied with an obvious tone,"It appears to be a dragon."
"A dragon, dragons died out during the War of Monsters", said Mathew exasperated.
"Obviously you won't be leaving soon, so would you like to come inside.", the half elf said sounding annoyed.
Mathew followed the half elf inside the building were he set the wood on a pile by the wall and took off hood. He had dusty blond hair with silver streaks in it, one eye was blue and the other eye was green and his ears were longer then a normal humans.]

23-Jan-2011 16:21:36 - Last edited on 23-Jan-2011 16:38:44 by Fireheart449

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