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The Last Dragon: Santhari

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Mean Bean567

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Chapter 2
The Journey for the White Liquid
Santhari watched as the two legged beast walked away from her. She wished it had given her more of the white liquid. It had tasted good but she was still hungry. She could feel the strange thing around her neck. She tried to follow the beast but the thing prevented her from moving. She repeatedly rammed her body towards the creature but each time the thing stopped her. She tried bitting it but it hurt her tong and tasted horrible, so she lifted a clawed paw and started scratching at it. The weak thing quickly snapped and she turned towards the beast. She couldn't see it any longer so she turned and moved to go into the strange tree. She pushed at the spot were the beast had entered and found a small whole at the bottom. She pushed her paw through it and when she pulled her paw back the thing moved. She passed through the gap that she had appeared at the side and moved into the tree. She walked through the building till she reached the box that the liquid had come from. It was high up above her and she climbed up until she reached it. She use her paw again to pull open the box and she saw some of the white liquid. She moved forward and licked at the liquid but she couldn't reach it. Something was blocking her from the liquid. Once again she pawed and it and the thing was knocked over. There was a crash and white liquid spilled out all over the place. She began drinking up the wonderful liquid.

18-Jan-2011 00:55:19 - Last edited on 18-Jan-2011 18:30:55 by Mean Bean567

Carsten 901

Carsten 901

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epic chapter and here is the bio.
name: Nate.
age: 19
gender: male
species: Elf
description: He has one blue eye and one green eye with dusty blond hair with silver streekes through it. He wears camo constanily and he has a large scar that wraps around his torso up to his shoulder but he hides it.
weapons: He uses daggers and throwing knifes.
inventory: A tinderbox and that is about it.
extra: He uses stealth to get up close to use his daggers that he is great at using.

18-Jan-2011 03:36:06

SiphoDias
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SiphoDias

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I think I'll post a bio as well.
name: Sifo Dias age: 28
gender: male
species: human
description: Dark blond hair, dark blue eyes. He's always ready for a fight. When he's not in his dragon battle armor, he's wearing red robes.
weapons: A two handed dragon battleaxe
inventory: A monument to his dead brother.
extra: He lost his brother when he was about 16, and ever since then he has the tendency to "fly off the hook."

18-Jan-2011 04:00:49

Mean Bean567

Mean Bean567

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Thanks for the feedback and the bios guys. Carsten 901 is there any particular way you would like me to explain his eyes being different colors. I'll do my best to add these two characters in. It could be a couple chapters before I am able to but I will get them in.

18-Jan-2011 04:07:46 - Last edited on 18-Jan-2011 04:09:25 by Mean Bean567

Arkoless

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name: Arabus (real name: Sawknife)
age: 22
gender: Male
Species: Goblin
description: Arabus was given the name Sawknife by the other goblins, but after being banished, chose a new one. The name he chose ended up being "Arabus," which translates into "witty." He picked this name because of a sense of poetic justice, because of the fact that he was kicked out of the goblin village for being "to human-like." Arabus was not a slavering idiot, or a warmonger. He talked eloquently, and thought philisophically, which was as good as treason to the other goblins.
weapons: In his right hand he carries a war axe that he took from a dwarf he had killed while still a member of his village. In his left was the saw-bladed knife his goblin name had come from.
inventory: Mostly carries an exceptional amount of books, but also some standard supplies, like a tinderbox and tent.
extra: He has three facial tattoos- a Bandosian symbol with a jagged line through it on his right cheek( a mark of disgrace, showing his non-allegiance to Bandos), a crude pair of wings on his left cheek (a self-done one that he made to show his new allegiance to Armadyl), and a solid black triangle on his forehead (a goblin mark of death, meaning any surface goblins know that killing him is perfectly legal in their society.) He is extremely bitter toward other goblins.

18-Jan-2011 04:28:22

Sh4d0ws Pur3

Sh4d0ws Pur3

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Deffinitly took this idea from the book/film whichever you've followed called Eragon. The intro is nearly an exact copy except for the first bit and the last dragon title aswell?.
To be fair it is an amazing cycle of books.
If you really havn't got it from Eragon then your idea is freakishly simular to cristopher Palani's

18-Jan-2011 18:52:32

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