The reading ease: 3/3. It was very easy to read, There were few parts where i couldn't figure out what was going on, but then i quickly figured it out.
The plot: 3/3 not much i can say here...
grammer: Found no mistakes
over all grade: 7/10 Very nice work! congrats, you just got into the hall of moderate stories! You missed the hall of fame by one point, sorry bout that
I will constantly be checking up to see when it's finished, but will not grade the end unless is specifically asked of me
08-Mar-2009 19:19:33
- Last edited on
08-Mar-2009 19:24:12
by
Pigwig70