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Thanks, Frodo.
Yeah, redundancy and dialogue was a big problem through the first part of the story, and somewhat through the second part. You'll notice that as you read on, you'll find that the grammar gets better, gradually.
Thanks for your advice.
Yeah, redundancy and dialogue was a big problem through the first part of the story, and somewhat through the second part. You'll notice that as you read on, you'll find that the grammar gets better, gradually.
Thanks for your advice.
27-Aug-2009 16:08:59
Thanks Ciao
28-Aug-2009 01:10:54
My profile is full.
I have to renew a lot of my bookmarks.
I have to renew a lot of my bookmarks.
28-Aug-2009 17:02:15
Re bookmark your own story?
Bump.
Bump.
28-Aug-2009 20:41:16
Yeah. Once you have 200 (live) threads on your profile, the bottom ones slowly disappear as you post more that get added to the top. Since I made this a long time ago, it fell off the bottom of my profile, so I re-bookmarked it.
28-Aug-2009 20:59:37
That should be fixed...
Guess it's kind of like a friend list though.
Guess it's kind of like a friend list though.
29-Aug-2009 05:27:57
Alright, I'll let you guys in on a little secret. I've begun work on a new chapter today. I'm finally going back to writing this.
I haven't written anything in 6 months, so I apologize if I'm a little shaky. I'm also a lot slower in writing, since my instincts for word choice and grammar and such aren't as fast. Hopefully I'll recover soon enough.
I've written a couple of pages, and I'm taking a break. Slowly but surely I'll write the chapter.
I haven't written anything in 6 months, so I apologize if I'm a little shaky. I'm also a lot slower in writing, since my instincts for word choice and grammar and such aren't as fast. Hopefully I'll recover soon enough.
I've written a couple of pages, and I'm taking a break. Slowly but surely I'll write the chapter.
29-Aug-2009 23:31:52
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