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He pulled the chain back with all his force. Lakos was still off his feet, and he is pulled toward Joshua. The snow white haired man impaled his sword into the gut of the werewolf. His dark blood dripped to the sand, turning it red. Lakos looked frustrated, but he then grew a smirk on his face. "You're pretty good kid." he whispered.

Joshua pulled his sword out, and Lakos jumped on top of the giant spike of rock created by Joshua. He looked down on his enemy, then the frustrated look grew back on his face. "You're annoying me." he said with a hard voice. "It's time for ya ta die."

Meanwhile, back at the capital. Marcello was walking to the Wolfsbane's house in the pouring rain. When he arrived, he knocked his right knuckle on the wooden door. No response, which was rather odd. He repeats, and still no answer. This begins to make Marcello concerned.

"He's gone." a familiar voice mumbled.

This made Marcello jump a bit, surprised. He looks back and saw Sarah, she had a sad look on her face. "Who's gone?" he asked.

"Visdin," her voice was soft, "he left the city so he can become an Assassin."

"No, that does not sound like Visdin." Marcello crossed his arms. "Visdin wouldn't dare go to that side, that's very uncharacteristic of him."

"He said he found something he could not overlook."

Marcello looks up at the sky. "I wonder what it is."

"His mind was poisoned with the same Assassin nonsense." a familiar voice stated. Salomon walked up to the two and held out his journal. "Apparently, Joshua gave him this book. And the words covering these pages opened his eye to the truth."

Marcello's eyes widened. "That's your journal!" he pointed out.

"He must have taken it while he was here."

Sarah downed her head. "But..Joshua wouldn't do something like that..."

Marcello looks at Sarah with a serious expression. "He's an Assassin! Of course he would!" his voice was raised.
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11-Oct-2009 17:20:38

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"I'm not doubting it now," Salomon sighed, "he is an enemy. An enemy who's willing to lie to win people on his side."

"He's just like Ba'al."

Sarah did not like that comment one bit. She glares at Marcello. "Don't compare him to that monster!!" her voice raised.

Marcello glanced back at Sarah. "Why? The two have no significant differences."

Salomon looks at Sarah as well. "They both want to poison our minds with lies. They both wish for me to die. They both seek their own justice, without the right justice to be served."

"..."

"Why do you trying to defend the enemy, Sarah?"

"Because he's nice, and he doesn't deserve your disregarding comments."

Salomon's look upon Sarah changed to something more serious. "Has he poisoned your mind aswell?"

Sarah looked at Salomon with an angry look. "He hasn't poisoned anyone's mind." After that, she stomped back into her house. She slammed the door behind her. Salomon and Marcello look at each other, possibly thinking they should have changed their choice of words.

Returning to the heat of battle at the desert capital. Lakos jumped on top of the giant spike of rock created by Joshua. He looked down on his enemy, then the frustrated look grew back on his face. "You're annoying me." he said with a hard voice. "It's time for ya ta die."
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11-Oct-2009 17:23:39

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Joshua jumped up, right in-front of Lakos. He swings his bloodied blade at Lakos, who blocks with his two daggers. Lakos pushed Joshua back, and he fell to the sand below. Joshua quickly got back to his feet and readied himself. "I'm done playin' games." the werewolf stated.

Lakos began to grow bigger, his arms and leg grew double their original size. His upper body did the same thing. His hands turned into razor sharp claws. His shirt rips as his body grew. Dark blue fur covered his body, and his eyes glowed yellow. After about sixteen seconds of transforming, his metamorphosis was complete. He cries a loud howl, which echos throughout the desert city.

Joshua truly readies himself. "I've never fought a werewolf before." he said in his head. "I must be careful."

The End of Chapter 6
Next Chapter,
Chapter 7: Descry

Thank you for reading, I appreciate it ^_^

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11-Oct-2009 17:26:59

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Well I decided to read your story more and I will now make that BIO even though I have not catched up on the story.

Name: Jack of Klarin

Race: Human

Age: 25

Birth date: He has never discussed that before. ^#(@!34 My keyboard is sticky!

Gender: Male

Weapon: He has a Dragon 2h sword with a double edge. He has light Runite armor and a saradomin cape, his armor is under a white robe similiar to what Altiar has.

Army: Assasin hunters

Appearance: 5 Foot 11 with long dark brown hair. He has blue eyes and no beard. He usually has a serious/stern look on his face.

Personality: He talks rather quietly and he is sneaky. He rarely uses streets in a city, he usually is climbing something. He does, despite stern personality, has a good sense of humor. (*#%*^*^#*^**#*$&%*^*& This sticky key board is really (*(&(&^(^&($$^#&^ing me off! He is also rather intelligent.

Short history: He never really discussed that. He had always hated his parents. When he ran away at age nine he learned how to fight and climb effectively. He decided when the fith age ended to fight for the assasin hunters.

Family: He never discussed this.

Well that is my BIO use it well.

11-Oct-2009 19:06:55 - Last edited on 12-Oct-2009 22:21:46 by [#XJG4QTEXR]

Seph
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AHAHAHAHA!!!!


I have unleashed MY VERY OWN CLAN upon the forums! Anyone want to join? Just hop to Quick find code: 87-88-639-59718295!!!!


Also, Serene, If I were to advert your story series on my Thread, would you advert my thread on your stories? You don't have to say yes, just wondering...


Well time to go and grab some recruits!


~Insane Soule "How Can Mirrors Be Real If Our Eyes Aren't Real?" -Jaden Smith

12-Oct-2009 07:46:50

Random Kate
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Genius (Tranfork), be patient.. She wasn't feeling well today. =/

*crosses "kid" off* *lifts up hands like a gun* You're pretty good. ... Haha, Metal Gear reference. Classic. :]

I doubt that's his first challenge. But, we can never be so sure, right? Anyway, great chapter.

13-Oct-2009 00:31:43 - Last edited on 13-Oct-2009 00:32:07 by Random Kate

Serene End
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Aha! I caught my sister trying to spoil red-handed! And I thought I threw you in a dark room. How the hell did you manage to get out?! You're an accomplice with Ark, aren't you?!?!?! -.- And you and your references. Gawd, I'ma k0 you for that. RAWRZZZ! *runs quickly to Cathrine, but sees a cardboard box in-front of me.*

AMG! Snake! *flips box over but finds nothing. But from behind, I hear "Freeze!" in a old, rough voice*

AMG! Snake! *looks behind self and finds out it was Liquid* WHAT?!?! O_o
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But yes, what my sister said is true. I've been a little under the weather lately (despite it being beautiful weather outside) and have not been feeling well. =/ However, that won't stop me from posting!

There is a few things I need to say.

Tranfork, I WILL NOT accept your bio. There are a few things I'm going to point out that made me feel like it won't fit in. Here are the problems, fix these problems to remedy the situation:

1. Be sure to move the Armor description from the Weapon part to the Appearance section.

2. I'm not so great with humor. So, if you could remove that bit. I'll appreciate that.

3. Just because he doesn't discuss his past doesn't mean you can't have it on the bio. It'll help if I wish to have to reveal it during the course of the story.

4. I hate to point this out (being the fact I never said it) but the Assassin Hunters were not around during the end of the Fifth Age. It was around the rise of the Assassins (which was around the thirteenth year of the Sixth Age) is when Salomon created the Assassin Hunters. Mama mia, I need a timeline. O_o

5. Could you remove the *^**#*$& bits? Appreciate it.
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If you need to add another post, simply edit your original bio post and remove all the text. Then type "Bio moved to Page 54", then repost your bio. Just remember, if I don't accept your bio again, do not get upset or angry as it is a rule.

Again, I appreciate that you follow these requests.

Thanks, ^_^
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13-Oct-2009 01:52:16 - Last edited on 13-Oct-2009 01:58:08 by Serene End

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