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He sighed. "Hmm..I guess we're done then." he mumbled to himself. He looks back at Visdin with a smirk. "I've got to go, ciao."
He shot a dart at the ground near Visdin. Smoke began to spray out. Vezyfher ran back to the Raven Reaper's castle. Nyx sees that Vezyfher was running. She sighs. "Already?" she pouts. "Fine.." Afterwards, she disappears into the ground. All the Raven Reaper assassins turn into ravens and fly away.
"C'mon everyone! This is our chance to leave!" Marcello shouted to the others. Everyone began to run towards the exit. When they arrived at the exit, the gates were sealed.
"We're trapped!" Sarah shouted.
Janak smirked. "Not for long!" he replied. He placed his hand on the ground and he created a tunnel underneath the caged exit. "There."
"Well, problem solved." Darien said.
"Let's go."
They go through the tunnel and out to the outside. They escaped the city. Back at where the battle took place. Lev didn't retreat to the castle. He walked over to Acubens' right arm and picked it up.
"Well, good thing you're dead. I'm one step closer to becoming Abaddon's one and only true son." he mumbled to himself. The word "ölüm" on Acubens' right arm began to glow. The mark disappears off of Acubens' arm and it appeared on Lev's upper right arm.
He smiled. "And now to find the Failure and the Hated. And then, I'll become Abaddon's true son."
The End of Chapter 12
Next Chapter,
Chapter 13: Victory through Error
Thank you for reading, I appreciate it.
~Biomaster7
(Yeah, I know. Bad ending to a great battle, right? The reasons of them leaving will be explained in the next chapter.)
He shot a dart at the ground near Visdin. Smoke began to spray out. Vezyfher ran back to the Raven Reaper's castle. Nyx sees that Vezyfher was running. She sighs. "Already?" she pouts. "Fine.." Afterwards, she disappears into the ground. All the Raven Reaper assassins turn into ravens and fly away.
"C'mon everyone! This is our chance to leave!" Marcello shouted to the others. Everyone began to run towards the exit. When they arrived at the exit, the gates were sealed.
"We're trapped!" Sarah shouted.
Janak smirked. "Not for long!" he replied. He placed his hand on the ground and he created a tunnel underneath the caged exit. "There."
"Well, problem solved." Darien said.
"Let's go."
They go through the tunnel and out to the outside. They escaped the city. Back at where the battle took place. Lev didn't retreat to the castle. He walked over to Acubens' right arm and picked it up.
"Well, good thing you're dead. I'm one step closer to becoming Abaddon's one and only true son." he mumbled to himself. The word "ölüm" on Acubens' right arm began to glow. The mark disappears off of Acubens' arm and it appeared on Lev's upper right arm.
He smiled. "And now to find the Failure and the Hated. And then, I'll become Abaddon's true son."
The End of Chapter 12
Next Chapter,
Chapter 13: Victory through Error
Thank you for reading, I appreciate it.
~Biomaster7
(Yeah, I know. Bad ending to a great battle, right? The reasons of them leaving will be explained in the next chapter.)
The end
is only
the beginning...
30-Aug-2009 18:28:58 - Last edited on 30-Aug-2009 18:36:31 by Serene End
Stunned. Speechless. AMAZED!
:o
By far the best battle YET. yet.
I would usually say something funny or put a little funny story here now, but i'm too struck with...something...to do so....so yeaaaa.....
I'll just shut up now.
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31-Aug-2009 02:17:47
Well, you said you were speechless. So, that counts as 'shutting up'.
Was it REALLY the best battle? The best battle I've ever done EVER. That's not possible for a non-ending chapter. o.o
...
..Or is it?
Wigwam. I think this might require 10 years of extensive research.
P.S: Haha! 1800th total post!
~Biomaster7
Was it REALLY the best battle? The best battle I've ever done EVER. That's not possible for a non-ending chapter. o.o
...
..Or is it?
Wigwam. I think this might require 10 years of extensive research.
P.S: Haha! 1800th total post!
~Biomaster7
The end
is only
the beginning...
31-Aug-2009 05:16:18
Not yet, Biomaster, You power hungry fool!
Indeed as awesome as it gets....yet.
There are people getting sliced in half, people's throats getting slit left and right, people getting cut in half, people using Dragon claw specs, but failing and getting a Dragon Battleaxe in the back of the head for it
, people getting impaled, people getting burneed alive, people getting eaten by godzilla - erm....wrong chat? what do you mean that doesnt work here!? Gaaarrhh, turn it off!
All in all, not just another Brick-in-the-wall chapter. that one was Final chapter worthy it was so good. In fact, That chapter goes next to my other favorite-TWIF 2 final chapter!
_-_-_-In other news!_-_-_
The world's largest stapler is moved twelve miles away from it's former location in ohio.
Ark Von Doom,known as a criminal mastermind and the current holder of the International Evil man of the year title, was found yesterday at a Denny's. that is all.
Zezima, the most famous player of runescape and the largest consumer of mcgrittles in the world, was found dead today in his 1970s pink convertable. Investigators say that the famour rser became to enlarged to exit his vehicle, and eventually died of hunger (5 minutes after he entered the car).
A guy got a stapler thrown at him in kentucky. he died.
Thank you for joining us, I'm Wigwam126 and this is NOT sparta news.
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ˆ•.,¸,.•ˆ.....ˆ•.,¸,.•ˆ............................................`•.¸ † ¸.•`............................................ˆ•.,¸,.•ˆ. "How Can Mirrors Be Real If Our Eyes Aren't Real?" -Jaden Smith
Indeed as awesome as it gets....yet.
There are people getting sliced in half, people's throats getting slit left and right, people getting cut in half, people using Dragon claw specs, but failing and getting a Dragon Battleaxe in the back of the head for it
, people getting impaled, people getting burneed alive, people getting eaten by godzilla - erm....wrong chat? what do you mean that doesnt work here!? Gaaarrhh, turn it off!
All in all, not just another Brick-in-the-wall chapter. that one was Final chapter worthy it was so good. In fact, That chapter goes next to my other favorite-TWIF 2 final chapter!
_-_-_-In other news!_-_-_
The world's largest stapler is moved twelve miles away from it's former location in ohio.
Ark Von Doom,known as a criminal mastermind and the current holder of the International Evil man of the year title, was found yesterday at a Denny's. that is all.
Zezima, the most famous player of runescape and the largest consumer of mcgrittles in the world, was found dead today in his 1970s pink convertable. Investigators say that the famour rser became to enlarged to exit his vehicle, and eventually died of hunger (5 minutes after he entered the car).
A guy got a stapler thrown at him in kentucky. he died.
Thank you for joining us, I'm Wigwam126 and this is NOT sparta news.
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ˆº•¸......¸•ºˆº•¸..............................................W!G|W@M126................................................¸•ºˆº•¸......¸•°ˆ
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ˆ•.,¸,.•ˆ.....ˆ•.,¸,.•ˆ............................................`•.¸ † ¸.•`............................................ˆ•.,¸,.•ˆ. "How Can Mirrors Be Real If Our Eyes Aren't Real?" -Jaden Smith
31-Aug-2009 06:29:49
*random Spartan runs into the news room* THIS IS SPARTA!!!!
No..I think he said this isn't Sparta news.
*Spartan walks out of the news room with a depressed look on his face*
Just a little fyi..More battling is a-comin'. And this time, there will be a difference in something.
TWIF 2's ending chapter was your favorite? Really? I figured RTS' finish was. o.o
~Biomaster7
No..I think he said this isn't Sparta news.
*Spartan walks out of the news room with a depressed look on his face*
Just a little fyi..More battling is a-comin'. And this time, there will be a difference in something.
TWIF 2's ending chapter was your favorite? Really? I figured RTS' finish was. o.o
~Biomaster7
The end
is only
the beginning...
31-Aug-2009 06:48:13
Eh, RTS chapters can't have a favorite. they were good, but they were a suspention type story - without The resto f the chapters it wouldnt seem near as good. For TWIF 1, it seemed good, but it IS NOTHING compared to now. TWIF 2 was way more battle, better planned out, and with a few good turns.
All in all, pwnage path so far. Overall I feel sad so few know about your stories, when noob stories, and less...well, "lighter" stories get more attention.
Also...Ahaha! Landmark!
*Reads post*
NNNOOOOOOO!!!!!!
Wait....Biomaster, you didnt get the landmark - that guy that bookmarked it did! :o
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ˆ•.,¸,.•ˆ.....ˆ•.,¸,.•ˆ............................................`•.¸ † ¸.•`............................................ˆ•.,¸,.•ˆ. "How Can Mirrors Be Real If Our Eyes Aren't Real?" -Jaden Smith
All in all, pwnage path so far. Overall I feel sad so few know about your stories, when noob stories, and less...well, "lighter" stories get more attention.
Also...Ahaha! Landmark!
*Reads post*
NNNOOOOOOO!!!!!!
Wait....Biomaster, you didnt get the landmark - that guy that bookmarked it did! :o
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ˆº•¸......¸•ºˆº•¸..............................................W!G|W@M126................................................¸•ºˆº•¸......¸•°ˆ
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ˆ•.,¸,.•ˆ.....ˆ•.,¸,.•ˆ............................................`•.¸ † ¸.•`............................................ˆ•.,¸,.•ˆ. "How Can Mirrors Be Real If Our Eyes Aren't Real?" -Jaden Smith
01-Sep-2009 02:12:53 - Last edited on 01-Sep-2009 02:15:22 by Seph
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