That was awesome
And Abaddon was so CREEPY at the end. The childish little innocent phrases alongside tearing off his limbs and generally bleeding everywhere... It was FREAKY! In a GOOD WAY
And then everyone kept falling and getting back up and being killed again! The desperate struggle for survival... WAH!
And Ba'al taking out Abaddon at the beginning of the chapter, while shortly disproved, was still really awesome. Marcello just HAD to be nice and forgive them both in the end though >_<
And Lakos getting the Orb of Shadows in the endgame... Sweeet. It's just one of the few items out there that you can grab and be instantly a much bigger threat than you were a second ago. Like Zeus' lightning, or the super-gun from the end of Half-Life
I've been holding those in since earlier today... Gah, silly school; makin meh read in increments! Let me reassure you that Crimson stays just as epic when read in death-defying installments
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ROFL! Dr.Steinamn for the win Insane! And Leliana from Dragon Age if I'm not mistaken
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Question: How did Vezyfher get away from Aries? That guy could take a hit... And they both collapsed right near eachother. But if Aries was still con*ious... *concocts a conspiracy theory about divine intervention by Aphrodite*. Could this internationally reognized theory be true!?
Vezyfher Anvecias... Sounds Italian. And snazzy. Like Fabio. I rarely use real first names, so they mostly come from how they sound on the tongue. In this case it sounds like he could get ladies with just his name, and his personality matched accordingly
Lakos is a blunt two syllable name, and if he's the Bronx Thug then Vezyfher's three syllable's make him the Suave Mafioso. Pronounced Vez-eee-fur (said like "fez"
, unless he says it with a fancy accent, then it's Vay-zay-fair!
Lakos Del Congelada means something along the lines of Lakos the Icy or Lakos the Frost, with a few changed letters. I beleive it's Spanish but it was quite a while ago so I don't remember XD His name is intended as both fitting and ironic, because he uses ice but his personality is fiery as heck
La-co-sss Del Con-je-la-da.
Also, both Vezyfher and Anvecias return only this thread as a result on any major search engine. So they're super-unique as names
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Ark Von Doom
Bah.... Ark, you do know "Living Crime" is kinda.. coming up soon. I don't suppose you have some type of character as ownage as Vezyfher up your sleeve?
Bah, I likely get back leadership in the clan I'm in today! Muahahahaha....hah.
Other than that... Yes, Dr. Stienmann IS ftw! Now- scalpel please. >.>
~Insane Soule
"How Can Mirrors Be Real If Our Eyes Aren't Real?" -Jaden Smith
It's hard to settle on a dood
There are two idea's I'm working on and... I want to take the ears off, but I can't!
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Name: Bartholomew Nyll
Gender: Male
Race: Human
Age: 27
Weapon: Sewing Needles & Thread
Summary: A silly and enthusiastic Templar, he'd rather stitch than fight, and constantly talks to a ragdoll named Forscythe in his possession... Which of course never talks back. He was the spoiled son of a rich noble and a Templar mother, but instead of becoming a brat he simply turned out overly nice to everyone; something that doesn't always serve him well. Despite his eccentricities, Bart has a strong sense of justice and has turned the basic instruments of a seamster into a weapon to be feared and become a true expert at both lethal and nonlethal combat styles.
Name: Shiazi Yogu
Gender: Female
Race: Human
Age: 19
Weapon: A Giant Pair of Scissors
Summary: A Cyborg girl with a mechanical heart set on vengeance. Coming from a family of Mourners, her father was killed during the original outbreak of Plague. Shortly after her family, unprotected, was robbed of most that it had left during the panic that followed in East Ardougne. Enraged and unable to cope, she threw herself into situation after situation involving physical violence from a young age, eventually running afoul of some major criminal players and being severely wounded in a confrontation. A traveler from the East found her afterwards and did his best to save her from dying... But the end result was a loss of several vital elements, including her right eye and her heart, which were replaced with advanced mechanical versions from Eastern lands. Despite all the misfortune she's already experienced, Shiazi continues to throw herself needlessly into danger, and tends to solve problems with enough violence that it's not much better than the very criminals she's killing...
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Comedy and Tragedy... But both so darn interesting
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